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VIII
Contributed by
savingmarion
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:16:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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A pale moon rises
I’ve tried so hard to forget
Still the moon is pale
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2005-01-19 16:16:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: VIII
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:08:09 PM AEST (User
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Isn't a pale moon rises the name of a song..or a movie..no I think it's a song.. |
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Re: VIII
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinbaker62 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 03:47:05 PM AEST (User
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I actually enjoyed this very much. This form of poetry is wonderful to reach the essence of a subject, and I should know because I've written TWO.. Ho hum !!!! |
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