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Yobabyyourhairismyintestinalspaghetti
Contributed by
savingmarion
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Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:13:03 PM in AEST
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When can I expect you to speedily come,
So violently palpitating through my dreams and convulsions?
I once tagged murder merely as poetic license,
But I like the way your entrails bring out your eyes.
Working the calendar cadaveric!!
This is the moment, in which I sped up my bleeding,
I sped up the flow just to feel you vociferate.
A blank mausoleum could not hold what I will impart.
I think this seizure sprung leak such that it spilled,
Into and over what you expect.
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Re: Yobabyyourhairismyintestinalspaghetti
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:13:48 PM AEST (User
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do you know someone told me they wanted me to have a seizure during sex? they wanted to feel the spasms? I don't think it's funny..well kind of..maybe..but considering I suffer brain damage during every seizure and I'm almost a burned out bulb now..no, not very funny.. |
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Re: Yobabyyourhairismyintestinalspaghetti
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:34:33 PM AEST (User
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This is good. I like the imagination you employ here in words that others might use in an ill-advised fashion, yet they are coherent (so far as i've read) and make this songwrite stand out.
Well done. |
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Re: Yobabyyourhairismyintestinalspaghetti
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:43:31 PM AEST (User
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I love the title and how you made it all one word... I'm not sure I understand the poem though... may be just my lack of vocabulary
but anyway... nice post |
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