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Array ( [sid] => 80558 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wish [time] => 2005-01-19 14:07:46 [hometext] => poem for school.......plz post your notes [bodytext] => Everyday I see her,
She looks so happy and smiley,
So pretty and friendly,
No one would have thought a thing
Wish I could have helped her,

Her secret stayed with her,
No one had a clue,
The sadness inside of her,
The depression and anger,
Wish I could have helped her

So many problems,
No one to turn to,
The emotions grew stronger,
Wish I could have helped her.

I saw the scars on her arms,
The pain she must have felt,
Now I understand what was wrong,
But now its too late,
Wish I could have helped her.

Gone forever,
Never to see again,
The girl with her bottled up emotions,
Now in the skies above,
Wish I could have helped her [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Beni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Wish

Contributed by Beni on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:07:46 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Everyday I see her,
She looks so happy and smiley,
So pretty and friendly,
No one would have thought a thing
Wish I could have helped her,

Her secret stayed with her,
No one had a clue,
The sadness inside of her,
The depression and anger,
Wish I could have helped her

So many problems,
No one to turn to,
The emotions grew stronger,
Wish I could have helped her.

I saw the scars on her arms,
The pain she must have felt,
Now I understand what was wrong,
But now its too late,
Wish I could have helped her.

Gone forever,
Never to see again,
The girl with her bottled up emotions,
Now in the skies above,
Wish I could have helped her

Copyright © Beni ... [ 2005-01-19 14:07:46]
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Re: Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexi_Lexi on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 01:19:16 PM AEST
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That is sooooooooo sad!! Is about you? Or who is about! Well done! Luv ya xx

Re: Wish (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 03:08:45 PM AEST
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Beni this is marvellous.
Infinitely sad - a missed opportunity to heal a heart.
How often it happens we will never know, it's simply tragic how people could prevent such hopeless heartache and pain by anticipating by trying a little bit how the other one feels.
So few have this great gift. "Anticipating" and prevent a heart from breaking.

Beautiful poem that tells you about this tragedy.

Love and peace
Elizabeth Dandy

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