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To not know who you are
Looks like this time baby
You’ve pushed me a little too far

I’ve gone over the edge this time
I’m past the point of no return
Just the mention of your name right now
Causes my stomach to churn

Blood flows so freely
From the wounds that will never show
The cuts across my knuckles
Hide a pain you’ll never know

Lack of sleep and helplessness
Have gotten me this far
Looks like this time baby
You’ve pushed me a little to far

“Breathe now baby, just breathe The life away…"
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a little too far

Contributed by cinderella88 on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 02:23:23 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You don’t know what it feels like
To not know who you are
Looks like this time baby
You’ve pushed me a little too far

I’ve gone over the edge this time
I’m past the point of no return
Just the mention of your name right now
Causes my stomach to churn

Blood flows so freely
From the wounds that will never show
The cuts across my knuckles
Hide a pain you’ll never know

Lack of sleep and helplessness
Have gotten me this far
Looks like this time baby
You’ve pushed me a little to far

“Breathe now baby, just breathe The life away…"

Copyright Â© cinderella88 ... [ 2005-01-19 02:23:23]
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Re: a little too far (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:16:01 AM AEST
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Whoa! that was a strong write and a tad unsettling. Hmmm. Lets hope this is an internal monologue - I'd hate to be on the receiving end. And the last line? very impressive.

Spike

Re: a little too far (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:15:40 AM AEST
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These work well as lyrics. Felt they cut off a bit abruptly though.
Stitch

Re: a little too far (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 11:43:45 AM AEST
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yes i agree, very awesome last line, so powerful. such a great write, very sad. keep it up
the raven

Re: a little too far (User Rating: 1 )
by morgana on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 11:35:53 PM AEST
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great write! the same thing happened to me...but i gota go to court now lol

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