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Array ( [sid] => 80499 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sanctuary [time] => 2005-01-18 22:57:46 [hometext] => Please read and comment....hope you enjoy it.... [bodytext] => I love the way the pain feels
And the way that the blood falls
It’s my way of blocking the world
I’ve built my own fictitious walls

Pieced together with the scars
And sealed with the crimson red
That is where I feel safe
Deep inside my own head

For every drop of blood
There is a secret of a time I fell
And for every scar I have
There is a story for me to tell

Every secret and every story
Is filled with all the pain inside
But that is where they’re better off
Because they give me a place to hide

A sanctuary of my very own
Left alone where I can be free
I can think whatever thoughts I please
And there’s no one to say how it “should” be [comments] => 4 [counter] => 501 [topic] => 13 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Sanctuary

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:57:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I love the way the pain feels
And the way that the blood falls
It’s my way of blocking the world
I’ve built my own fictitious walls

Pieced together with the scars
And sealed with the crimson red
That is where I feel safe
Deep inside my own head

For every drop of blood
There is a secret of a time I fell
And for every scar I have
There is a story for me to tell

Every secret and every story
Is filled with all the pain inside
But that is where they’re better off
Because they give me a place to hide

A sanctuary of my very own
Left alone where I can be free
I can think whatever thoughts I please
And there’s no one to say how it “should” be

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2005-01-18 22:57:46]
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Re: Sanctuary (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:08:36 PM AEST
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I loved every line, Its how I feel and am at most times. Very very Powerful, It kinda reminds me of my Forever Alone but from the other side of things
Sorry for rambleing
Great Poem

Re: Sanctuary (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:35:25 PM AEST
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Great poem. I loved it. Nice work.

Re: Sanctuary (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:42:13 AM AEST
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hey i know dark poetry and this is a good one u have ur mind as sanctuary thats good wish i could go tomy mind for that. well good write and bye bye

DEMON

Re: Sanctuary (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 08:31:51 PM AEST
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Very good write..I really felt alot of what was expressed here..Good job.

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