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[title] => Cut Yourself
[time] => 2005-01-18 21:27:35
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[bodytext] => Cut Yourself
You tell me while you cry
All the reasons why
You want to die
They aren't good enough
The strife can be reached above
And you don't need any love
You only listen to yourself
And drown in the emotions felt
Down so far that you never hear me
And you're still blind to everything
Unable to breathe
Cut yourself, slice the vein
Kill yourself, hate the pain
Don't think about anything
Just give up everything
And cut the pain away
Forget why
You were given a life
Forget why
I even tried
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Cut Yourself
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:27:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Cut Yourself
You tell me while you cry
All the reasons why
You want to die
They aren't good enough
The strife can be reached above
And you don't need any love
You only listen to yourself
And drown in the emotions felt
Down so far that you never hear me
And you're still blind to everything
Unable to breathe
Cut yourself, slice the vein
Kill yourself, hate the pain
Don't think about anything
Just give up everything
And cut the pain away
Forget why
You were given a life
Forget why
I even tried
Copyright ©
essentially9
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2005-01-18 21:27:35]
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:39:17 PM AEST
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| Great write I loved the first stanza,very powerful. |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by visualizing_life on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:04:27 PM AEST
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| i really like it...reminds me of myself....nice expression...keep writing i want to read more or your work... |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by TaintedSoul on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:05:08 PM AEST
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It's a trial of patience, when trying to help one who is depressed. Whether it be yourself or a loved one. Well expressed.
peace
TS |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by Whitelightning77 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:10:52 PM AEST
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Very powerful. The sturggle to reach someone in that state of mind takes many forms of strength.
thanks for sharing!
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by Stalkee on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:12:13 PM AEST
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| powerful indeed...i especially enjoyed the first stanza too (as already mentioned) i think it really sets the tone for this poem...good job =) |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:45:43 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. Awesome poem.
Spazzo |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by juliette on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 12:12:53 AM AEST
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Very good write.....I can feel your frustration with trying to save this person who won't save their self.....Sometimes taking a step back from the situation does some good - Remember they have to want help as much as you want to help them.....
Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by Scarlett on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 05:47:53 AM AEST
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| very powerful, an enthralling read x |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:19:26 AM AEST
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| Jennifer you really are one of the few here that has talent worth a damn. |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by Brebabe33 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:18:15 PM AEST
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| Also a good write! I think that it has potentional and even though it is not one of my favorite subjects i like how u wrote it!! nicely done |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:03:12 PM AEST
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| Violent yet suttle to me..Course I am into horrible blood driven lines..This wets my appetite..Strong write |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by killingmehslowly on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 10:40:51 PM AEST
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| This is amazing and very very true. I've felt like that and I've done that. Tried to tune out the people that cared, that tore down my reasons. I told my self they didn't get it and carried on my dreary way. This hits so very close to home. I love it. -Sami- |
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Re: Cut Yourself
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by jono on
Friday, 21st July 2006 @ 10:17:49 AM AEST
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| I feel like that all the time |
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