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Array ( [sid] => 80485 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i love.... [time] => 2005-01-18 21:07:21 [hometext] => please comment [bodytext] => i love your eyes
i always fall into them

i love your smile
you always know when

i love your laugh
so warm and free

i love the way you look at me
like i matter

i love the way you hug me
like you never want to let me go

i love the way your hand always finds mine
like you always want to touch me

i love the way you kiss
like you want to kiss me always

i love the way you try and impress me
even though you already have my heart

i love everything about you
in everyway possible

but i dont love you
i wont let myself
fall for you anymore [comments] => 6 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 2 [informant] => visualizing_life [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

i love....

Contributed by visualizing_life on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:07:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i love your eyes
i always fall into them

i love your smile
you always know when

i love your laugh
so warm and free

i love the way you look at me
like i matter

i love the way you hug me
like you never want to let me go

i love the way your hand always finds mine
like you always want to touch me

i love the way you kiss
like you want to kiss me always

i love the way you try and impress me
even though you already have my heart

i love everything about you
in everyway possible

but i dont love you
i wont let myself
fall for you anymore

Copyright © visualizing_life ... [ 2005-01-18 21:07:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: i love.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:10:33 PM AEST
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Sweet poem. I really enjoyed reading it.

Re: i love.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Opinionator on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:20:53 PM AEST
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you asked for comments and therefore I am prepared to be honest. What are you trying to say? I really could not think that it took you more than maybe seven minutes to write this. If you are so head over heals for this person the last line is incongerous. Sorry, try again.

Re: i love.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stalkee on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 09:22:31 PM AEST
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wow, I really liked this...I like how it was structured...totally lead me in the direction that in the end it was gonna be like a big "I LOVE YOU!" but no, not all...great job, it was a joy to read =)

Re: i love.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 10:54:15 PM AEST
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Nice. But the end doesn't make sence when you said that you love this person then at the end say that you don't.

Spazzo

Re: i love.... (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 01:35:05 AM AEST
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it was alright until I got to the end then it all didnt make sense anymore. I like it though inspite of the odd ending..

Curtis

Re: i love.... (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:24:35 PM AEST
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i like it..its to the point ....and a good twist at the end that u know aint true ..great poem though
tractorbabe

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