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It makes you scream
It's dim lights trap you in

A room that screams and howls at you
And scares away your dreams

And then when morning comes
It slowly whispers away
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A Nightmare

Contributed by freckle on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:45:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

It makes you shake
It makes you scream
It's dim lights trap you in

A room that screams and howls at you
And scares away your dreams

And then when morning comes
It slowly whispers away

Copyright © freckle ... [ 2005-01-18 19:45:21]
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Re: A Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 07:06:08 PM AEST
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Short & amazing..... I loved it!!! I remember my teachers screaming at me all the time to do my homework..... I hated it :(!!! :P Oh well it made for an amazing poem... funny where we seem to find inspiration :D.... Amazing!!

Re: A Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:10:37 PM AEST
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nicely done for being written in five minutes by a desparate grade schooler

Re: A Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by QueenEEliz33 on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:35:05 PM AEST
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I thought your poem was short and cute, i was i had that talent in grade school

Re: A Nightmare (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 21st February 2005 @ 06:28:18 PM AEST
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an interesting choice for your first post here. Talent found in grade school. Did you continue to write after that or put it away and come back to it later ? There is depth here that I wouldn't expect from someone that young.

Would I be the first then to welcome you into our YPDC family ? Welcome Carol, may you find the site as entertaining and as therapudic as have I, and many who have preceeded us ...

Nazzy ~

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