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Array ( [sid] => 80410 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PAIN AND TURMOIL [time] => 2005-01-18 13:31:46 [hometext] => I thought of this poem because it reminded me that life isn't always the way you want it to be and sometimes it feels as though you are slipping slowing into hell. [bodytext] => He gazed into the obscured abyss
With troubled eyes amiss
The firy depths of despair
Could not reach his wiry stare

He heard them wail
As his mouth went stale
He tried to cry
But could not reply

He weeped and moaned
And wished of home
As he loses his soul
To pain and turmoil [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 6 [informant] => scottishdancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

PAIN AND TURMOIL

Contributed by scottishdancer on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:31:46 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

He gazed into the obscured abyss
With troubled eyes amiss
The firy depths of despair
Could not reach his wiry stare

He heard them wail
As his mouth went stale
He tried to cry
But could not reply

He weeped and moaned
And wished of home
As he loses his soul
To pain and turmoil

Copyright © scottishdancer ... [ 2005-01-18 13:31:46]
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Re: PAIN AND TURMOIL (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:43:58 PM AEST
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Ah i think this could mean somthing diffrent for every person who reads it. i like the rythem too it. Thanks for sharing

Re: PAIN AND TURMOIL (User Rating: 1 )
by scottishdancer on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 01:48:16 PM AEST
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I didn't write this intending to describe hell. When I wrote this I wanted to describe metaphorically how I was feelign inside, but I want everyone that reads it to use their life experiences to come up with their own interpretation of it because it can be interpretated in many different ways.

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