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All i Feel now
Contributed by
StrwBrryStrBrst0225
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:52:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Theres nothing to do but just sit around,
talking bout all the love that I found,
and the fact that i lost it ,
now that you aint around.
My heart has dropped down,
been thrown to the ground,
but since when have you cared
no more smiles just frowns.
So i'm letting go
and i feel like i've drowned
in all this love thats no longer around
And it hurts
yes it hurts...
thats all i feel now.
Copyright ©
StrwBrryStrBrst0225
... [
2005-01-17 13:52:04]
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Re: All i Feel now
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by Gimpie on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:01:30 PM AEST
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| that's really good...I like. :) I like how you used words that similarly rhymed. nice . Keep it up :) |
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Re: All i Feel now
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by Kuro_Mirai on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:14:36 PM AEST
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| Awesome poem, I really liked it. |
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Re: All i Feel now
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 09:38:05 PM AEST
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Great write!
Blessing |
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Re: All i Feel now
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 07:43:08 PM AEST
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awesome poem .. great write on this poem
good job. i really like it. i think it was great.
butterflygirl40
hugssssssss! |
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