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She Was Calling....
Contributed by
Dying_Angel
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:35:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The lovers met a while back
about a year ago or so
glued to each others lips
Like the stickiest of dough
Everything was so perfect
Too good to be true
She was secretly unhappy
She told everyone, she told you
But you say she never spoke of it
Truthfully though anyone could see the distress in her eye
Though you too blind by love to see,
Somewhere knew she went home to cry
Her family disgusted by the state she was in
She never said a word frightened by the abuse
Her father so large and pathetic
Put her through
So really it's not surprising
The note was left unwritten unsigned
Because truthfully
there was no one there to read it
Copyright ©
Dying_Angel
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2005-01-17 13:35:57]
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Re: She Was Calling....
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by wolfman on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:53:45 PM AEST
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that is teribale, havin to suffer through such an ordeal as being in love but not have any I dont know how people are able to be in love and not have it or give it this is sad and these are the thoughts that I would have as well but I dont think that I would be able to go through with it no matter how much pain I was going through... (sighs)
this is a goood poem i like how its no singald to one person but a whole family ( I do hope that its not true and if it is I am sorry for you and I will be praying for you) it show a wider perspective in a non - violent aproach, this was very good. please post again.
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Re: She Was Calling....
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:54:33 PM AEST
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| Sad and terribly true to many. Very though provoking, very emotional. A great overall write. Good job. |
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