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Icicles
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 10:30:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Icicles.....
Hanging like melted wax
securely gripping
the mountain cliffs.
Piquing my curiosity with its long finger like drips.
Crystal clear water
Seeping from
Betwixt the rocks
Frozen points
of captured treasure
until...
the warmth unlocks.
Copyright ©
deadheadpoet
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2005-01-17 10:30:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Icicles
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:19:24 PM AEST (User
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Cool description! I'll think of it next time I see icicles. Cheers! |
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Re: Icicles
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ravensfire on
Saturday, 29th January 2005 @ 12:20:39 AM AEST (User
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brings me back to erie, the cold nights, the snow, the fire going. sitting on a stump, hot coffee in hand, seeing the stars bright in the sky no lights diminishing the sight. great write. |
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Re: Icicles
(User Rating: 1 ) by vibes2go on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 02:05:45 PM AEST (User
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I've never seen a real icycle..must be awsome when the light shines through ..eh? yes dear, its me whaziz@yahoo.com, mary..great discriptive write.. |
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Re: Icicles
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:29:21 AM AEST (User
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laura, this was a wonderful. its one of the best ones ive seen imagery wise. =] |
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