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Array ( [sid] => 80197 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Standing Alone [time] => 2005-01-17 01:54:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In the darkness I wait alone
I go where I'm not known
I light a match to so I can see
Deep inside, I want to be free

You see a girl
You try not to hurl
Blood and a scar
You know she's not

I feel pain
I have nothing to gain
In the darkness I wait
For my undecided fait

You see a light on her
You walk closer
To get a good look
It looks like something out of a book

It hurts to move
Everyone always tell me to improve
I just hurt myself
To save yourself

You liked me like a lie
You always wanted me to die
So I'm here in the dark
And I've left my mark

I will never let you change me
I am what you will see
I will I am down to the bone
Even if it means by standing alone [comments] => 5 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Moshi_Moshi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Standing Alone

Contributed by Moshi_Moshi on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:54:40 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

In the darkness I wait alone
I go where I'm not known
I light a match to so I can see
Deep inside, I want to be free

You see a girl
You try not to hurl
Blood and a scar
You know she's not

I feel pain
I have nothing to gain
In the darkness I wait
For my undecided fait

You see a light on her
You walk closer
To get a good look
It looks like something out of a book

It hurts to move
Everyone always tell me to improve
I just hurt myself
To save yourself

You liked me like a lie
You always wanted me to die
So I'm here in the dark
And I've left my mark

I will never let you change me
I am what you will see
I will I am down to the bone
Even if it means by standing alone

Copyright © Moshi_Moshi ... [ 2005-01-17 01:54:40]
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Re: Standing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:02:40 AM AEST
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Good write. I really enjoyed it. :-)

Re: Standing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Kuro_Mirai on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:12:34 AM AEST
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Awesome job, Moshi Moshi! I'm glad you finally decided to post your own poetry. It's really good, keep writing!

Re: Standing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:13:25 AM AEST
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i liked this very much...the last stanza is very empowering....well done..good write

Re: Standing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by loopylou on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 03:56:44 AM AEST
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I love taht last line...its brings a perfect powerful ending!

Re: Standing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 09:19:56 AM AEST
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and with this read, you've gained a fan!

Cool name!

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