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Array ( [sid] => 80196 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Self-Slain [time] => 2005-01-17 01:41:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I am the Pain...
I am the Shame...
I am the Insain...
I am the Strange...
I am the Blamed...
I am the Untamed
I am Everything,
I can't hold on
It's all the same
Day after day
Stage after stage
It keeps going on
It never ends
It just begins
Start anew tomarrow
Unless I end it tonight
And stop the fight
There wouldnt be a tomarrow
Not for me at least
I would'nt awake
To the sarrow and the pain
I'd just drift away
After my Self-Slain! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ForeverAlone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Self-Slain

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:41:41 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I am the Pain...
I am the Shame...
I am the Insain...
I am the Strange...
I am the Blamed...
I am the Untamed
I am Everything,
I can't hold on
It's all the same
Day after day
Stage after stage
It keeps going on
It never ends
It just begins
Start anew tomarrow
Unless I end it tonight
And stop the fight
There wouldnt be a tomarrow
Not for me at least
I would'nt awake
To the sarrow and the pain
I'd just drift away
After my Self-Slain!

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-01-17 01:41:41]
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Re: Self-Slain (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:17:36 AM AEST
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wow, this is ****** awesome! i like it...its very sad but you've done a brilliant job, good writing

Re: Self-Slain (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:57:06 AM AEST
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Other than a few spelling errors here and there, this is a good poem. I like that I can relate to it, it's very true for many people. Good job.

Re: Self-Slain (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 01:15:38 PM AEST
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all who strugle with depression say those words many of them take them to sereously but then there are those who just say them to get attention I have doen both firs the later and now the former and its hard to go back but i am still trying to and this is probable the hardes thing that I will have to do for the longes time because I still dont see an end in sight. be strong and dont give up. if you need help we are all here for you.

this was a good poem it tells all the thoughts that suicidal people have to deal with and the pain there of it is hard but it is posible to get through it I know some who have and some who havent I dont know what it takes but I do know that I wont give up, or give up on any one who need help. good write. please post again soon.

wolfman

Re: Self-Slain (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:25:01 PM AEST
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not one of your best, but still shows your talent.

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