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Array ( [sid] => 80080 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Amazement Due to Snow [time] => 2005-01-16 11:32:04 [hometext] => I wrote this a while ago and have only recently found it. Hope you like it. Tell me what you thought plz :D!!! [bodytext] => Brisk, chilled wind
Just enough to freeze,
It’s a rough variation
On a winter breeze,
Dark, black clouds
Shadow overhead,
But lucky enough
I’m still in bed,
The day drags on
Whilst the weather clears,
Leaving behind
Rain drop smears,
I loosen myself
Take a glance outside,
I feel so amazed
I stare wide eyed,
As no rain had fallen
It was crisp, white snow,
My eyes are in love
With its radiant glow,
So rich is this view
It makes my heart beat fast,
Just a shame the sun will arrive
And this feeling won’t last
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 27 [informant] => sean88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )
Amazement Due to Snow

Contributed by sean88 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:32:04 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



Brisk, chilled wind
Just enough to freeze,
It’s a rough variation
On a winter breeze,
Dark, black clouds
Shadow overhead,
But lucky enough
I’m still in bed,
The day drags on
Whilst the weather clears,
Leaving behind
Rain drop smears,
I loosen myself
Take a glance outside,
I feel so amazed
I stare wide eyed,
As no rain had fallen
It was crisp, white snow,
My eyes are in love
With its radiant glow,
So rich is this view
It makes my heart beat fast,
Just a shame the sun will arrive
And this feeling won’t last




Copyright © sean88 ... [ 2005-01-16 11:32:04]
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Re: Amazement Due to Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by julieh on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:42:15 AM AEST
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I know what you mean i love the snow! how it hangs to the branches on trees.ireally enjoyed this take care ju


Re: Amazement Due to Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by Tinkerbell13 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:53:46 AM AEST
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I LIKED THE WAY U EXPRESSED THE WAY U FEEL ABOUT THE SNOW I L;OVE THE SNOW EVEN THOUGH WE GET VERY LITTLE OF IT HERE IN TEXAS NICE JOB!
--TINKERBELL13


Re: Amazement Due to Snow (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:19:34 PM AEST
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such a beautiful peice of writting, glissening in it's sparkle with reverence for nature, nice rhythum 2 it also, u write well . . .

Dorian Chambers




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