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Doors
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 04:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The miniature gaurd holds the door,
That threatens to burst outward.
His job defends villages along the shore,
Holding back what could hurt humans more.
For days something's been hidden,
Behind those unyeilding doors,
But the villagers are guilt ridden,
For the terror that guard must live in.
Nobody knows what is behind those doors,
Except the woman who lived inside,
And though she wanders the lonely shores,
She's terrified to touch the tainted doorway floors.
All that is unyeilding must someday give,
And hard as he could, he couldn't stop
The doors from unleashing on all that live,
Deepest dispair against weak initiative.
Salty Tears,
Rampaging Fears,
Guilty Pain,
Nothing to Gain,
Self Damnation,
***** Frustration.
Copyright ©
yellow_sundragon
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2002-12-05 16:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Doors
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 07:34:51 PM AEST (User
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Wow, this is really good! I'm not sure I quite get all of it, but it's good. There's always something more out there that you can't quite see. What you see is never all that's left. Trust me. :)
Love,
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Re: Doors
(User Rating: 1 ) by Elisabeth on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 04:26:43 AM AEST (User
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Cool poem, I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Doors
(User Rating: 1 ) by Icequeen on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 04:01:15 PM AEST (User
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Ohh, like it, clever and well written. Excellent :) |
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