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[title] => Backwards
[time] => 2005-01-16 10:46:02
[hometext] => I can't really explain what is going on in this poem. I would appreciate if you would post your comments ! thanky !
[bodytext] => Backwards I take a step forward Or so it seems Time goes and I’m not gaining I’m stuck inside a dream Close my eyes I see blackness The empty part of knowing Is haunting endless Life pauses For me to breathe Then fast forwards No longer waiting for me I can’t grasp anything All there is are broken dreams Slipping away bit by bit What will become of me ? I’m not moving anywhere near The new beginning Tickets were bought And the movie is not ending Swirling in a mess of yesterday Will tomorrow ever come ? I’m numb and waiting But my heart is dumb I ravel alone I need a companion To walk a backwards street To see the mountain, but be stuck in the canyon Too much of me is exposed The darkness is washing me away All the happiness, smiles, and laughter Are fading, day by day I need to move But there’s nothing to gain My mind is playing tricks Skin is in pain Life pauses For me to breathe No air flowing out Shadows become me . [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 65 [informant] => xXluckie_lynnXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
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