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Array ( [sid] => 80063 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Darkness of her Heart [time] => 2005-01-16 04:41:43 [hometext] => just another place in my mind.......... [bodytext] => Darkness of her Heart
7/2004

Falling forever,
never ending
it seems,
trying to
awaken from
nightmare dreams,...

Giving up all hope
while
clinching your
chest,
but still trying
not to let
your
soul rest,

clinging to
Life
while your
fingernails
break,
That's when
your
Enemies
choose
this time
to Awake,

Im
Screaming
out at the
White Light
above,
Then
into the
Darkness
flies A
Beautiful
Dove,
but she to
is
Consumed
and must
quickly
Depart,

For
nothing
can save you
from
The Darkness of her Heart.........................

by:ss_byrd $av $aucI~ [comments] => 6 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 13 [informant] => desperatesoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Darkness of her Heart

Contributed by desperatesoul on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:41:43 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Darkness of her Heart
7/2004

Falling forever,
never ending
it seems,
trying to
awaken from
nightmare dreams,...

Giving up all hope
while
clinching your
chest,
but still trying
not to let
your
soul rest,

clinging to
Life
while your
fingernails
break,
That's when
your
Enemies
choose
this time
to Awake,

Im
Screaming
out at the
White Light
above,
Then
into the
Darkness
flies A
Beautiful
Dove,
but she to
is
Consumed
and must
quickly
Depart,

For
nothing
can save you
from
The Darkness of her Heart.........................

by:ss_byrd $av $aucI~

Copyright © desperatesoul ... [ 2005-01-16 04:41:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Darkness of her Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 04:55:43 AM AEST
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A bit sad but an awesome write. Shows much wisdom.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Darkness of her Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:33:16 AM AEST
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"clinging to
Life
while your
fingernails
break,
That's when
your
Enemies
choose
this time
to Awake"

that was my fav bit.speaks the truth,enemies always attack when ur not strong,shows how weak they are tho.
Awesome write.

~keep the faith~
BB

Re: Darkness of her Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:34:57 AM AEST
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It's quite sad, but nevertheless a good poem. Great Write.

Re: Darkness of her Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by sean88 on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:24:35 AM AEST
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Very sad write! But it's well writen.

sean xxx

Re: Darkness of her Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:21:06 AM AEST
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Wow !! Very impressive!!
Good flow and rhyme scheme.

Re: Darkness of her Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 01:15:31 AM AEST
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love the flow of this

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