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Array ( [sid] => 80052 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => BLACK........is grief [time] => 2005-01-16 01:55:09 [hometext] => This is for my brother i lost & will never forget. [bodytext] => If i could say one thing to you, it would be i love you
If i could turn back the hands of time I would so you could be here with me today.
I would give anything for you to hold me in your arms again & say 'i love you sis'

I need your brother love, support & life
Where did you go?
Why did you leave me alone?
Was it to look after me from above.

Tell me why i need to know
I remember our memorys, never forgotten
I remember the last time we saw each other

18 to young to die
15 to young to loose a brother
To young for any death
I would just love to hear your voice

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BLACK........is grief

Contributed by mia on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:55:09 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

If i could say one thing to you, it would be i love you
If i could turn back the hands of time I would so you could be here with me today.
I would give anything for you to hold me in your arms again & say 'i love you sis'

I need your brother love, support & life
Where did you go?
Why did you leave me alone?
Was it to look after me from above.

Tell me why i need to know
I remember our memorys, never forgotten
I remember the last time we saw each other

18 to young to die
15 to young to loose a brother
To young for any death
I would just love to hear your voice

Copyright © mia ... [ 2005-01-16 01:55:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: BLACK........is grief (User Rating: 1 )
by Kuro_Mirai on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:23:13 AM AEST
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This poem is great. I wish I could say something to make you feel better, so, I bet your brother is in heaven, and wishing for you to feel better. I really like your poem, it really made me think.

Re: BLACK........is grief (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:59:09 AM AEST
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This is heart wrenchingly sad but beautifully written.
I'm so sorry for your loss but every time u think of him he's right there with u watching over you and wanting u to be happy.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: BLACK........is grief (User Rating: 1 )
by julieh on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 09:24:02 AM AEST
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This is so sad and the pain in your heart will be felt by all who reads it.take care ju

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