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Array ( [sid] => 80046 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Kind Of Darkness [time] => 2005-01-16 00:49:31 [hometext] => It's something I have thought about writing before, it's about time a wrote it... [bodytext] => When you are in this kind of darkness
You can not be anything other then hapless
Trapped in the place that has no light
You can't feel yourself standing upright

You're never in the spotlight
Always thrown to the side
Hate wells up inside you
Can't fight for your right.

It makes you feel worse
It feels like a curse
Always where no one can see
Your thoughts never free

They can't see you cry
Do they think you're just shy?
Wish you could shine
You can do nothing but pine

You can't be like them
It's like your condemned
Forever alone
To always be unknown

To be trapped forever
But never say never
Maybe someday you will find your way out
When that day comes, give me a shout [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kuro_Mirai [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

This Kind Of Darkness

Contributed by Kuro_Mirai on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:49:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

When you are in this kind of darkness
You can not be anything other then hapless
Trapped in the place that has no light
You can't feel yourself standing upright

You're never in the spotlight
Always thrown to the side
Hate wells up inside you
Can't fight for your right.

It makes you feel worse
It feels like a curse
Always where no one can see
Your thoughts never free

They can't see you cry
Do they think you're just shy?
Wish you could shine
You can do nothing but pine

You can't be like them
It's like your condemned
Forever alone
To always be unknown

To be trapped forever
But never say never
Maybe someday you will find your way out
When that day comes, give me a shout

Copyright © Kuro_Mirai ... [ 2005-01-16 00:49:31]
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Re: This Kind Of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 01:08:29 AM AEST
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I liked that alot, especially becouse it describes me, and I really relate to it1
Great poem

Re: This Kind Of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:51:11 AM AEST
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very nice. i like your talent.

Re: This Kind Of Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Moshi_Moshi on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 04:13:32 PM AEST
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Nice one Kuro-Chan!!! Your really good at writing poems.

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