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Array ( [sid] => 80012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Promises I made that are now broken..... [time] => 2005-01-15 17:44:15 [hometext] => When death calls us it takes our granted promises with us [bodytext] => I promised you a lifetime of happiness
A lifetime of wedded bliss
I promised you an eternity of love
That angels speak of in heaven above
I promised you a house with lovely ever greens
Far beyond what your imaginations ever seen
I promised I'd keep you warm through those cold
nights
Shine the way for you, I'd be your guiding light
I promised you I'd chase away your fears
Comfort you and wipe away your tears
I promised our love a place amongst the stars
Blazing eternally way up afar
I promised you every bit of my heart
A lifetime together and that we'd never part
But God opened his arms and said my time had come
It's time for me to go, to heaven was my new home
So for all the promises I made are now all broken
The promises I spoke of are now all unspoken..... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 43 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Promises I made that are now broken.....

Contributed by mina-1 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:44:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I promised you a lifetime of happiness
A lifetime of wedded bliss
I promised you an eternity of love
That angels speak of in heaven above
I promised you a house with lovely ever greens
Far beyond what your imaginations ever seen
I promised I'd keep you warm through those cold
nights
Shine the way for you, I'd be your guiding light
I promised you I'd chase away your fears
Comfort you and wipe away your tears
I promised our love a place amongst the stars
Blazing eternally way up afar
I promised you every bit of my heart
A lifetime together and that we'd never part
But God opened his arms and said my time had come
It's time for me to go, to heaven was my new home
So for all the promises I made are now all broken
The promises I spoke of are now all unspoken.....




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Re: Promises I made that are now broken..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 07:25:02 PM AEST
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Very sad. A reminder that we are not in charge. A good poem.


Re: Promises I made that are now broken..... (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:20:38 PM AEST
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A very good write that you have


Re: Promises I made that are now broken..... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:40:01 PM AEST
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very emotional great write


Re: Promises I made that are now broken..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:57:54 PM AEST
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excellent write. brilliant twist. very well done. nice concept illustrated. i love talent at its best, shone...


Re: Promises I made that are now broken..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:30:31 PM AEST
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Great write.
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