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Array ( [sid] => 80006 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Never Forever [time] => 2005-01-15 16:55:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => My choices violate the simplest plan
and I never forever forget
the way we are together
the way we are apart is not the same
We are so complicated
on a delicate lean
We are slippery and thin
held in
by a fragile seam
The passion never dwindles
only the time inbetween
I sometimes equate the hesitation
with stopping
Loving is all I got
on this bloody Saturday
when you're not here to receive
I lay here
spilling my love onto my sleeve
Looking for a place
in the shadows at home
and I never forever forget
that I am alone [comments] => 4 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Red_October [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Never Forever

Contributed by Red_October on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 04:55:30 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My choices violate the simplest plan
and I never forever forget
the way we are together
the way we are apart is not the same
We are so complicated
on a delicate lean
We are slippery and thin
held in
by a fragile seam
The passion never dwindles
only the time inbetween
I sometimes equate the hesitation
with stopping
Loving is all I got
on this bloody Saturday
when you're not here to receive
I lay here
spilling my love onto my sleeve
Looking for a place
in the shadows at home
and I never forever forget
that I am alone

Copyright © Red_October ... [ 2005-01-15 16:55:30]
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Re: Never Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 05:06:44 PM AEST
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good poem...i like the word usage
~Kay-Kay

Re: Never Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 11:48:31 PM AEST
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Nice! it's good to see your name again.....and i like this much....good deal.....truly...
t's not often i see something that i actually completly read ^_^

always, abraham

Re: Never Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 12:27:12 PM AEST
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"on this Bloody Saturday"

That line certainly brings in a new perspective, for me at least . . .

Well written, Tiffany J.

Re: Never Forever (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 09:45:31 AM AEST
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"the passion never dwindles
only the time in between"

loved those lines.

well written. as always, i love reading your work x

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