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Array ( [sid] => 7994 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Hidden Rage [time] => 2002-12-05 10:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can't take the pressure
I feel like I want to burst,
I want to fight or die
it doesn't matter which comes first.

People want perfection
but I want to get it over with,
To get the job done
is my mission and not just a myth.

No one understands
the way that I am,
I'd like a new life
and get far away from my fam.

I feel imprisoned
as if I'm in a cage,
One day I will
unleash my hidden rage. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Sonibe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Hidden Rage

Contributed by Sonibe on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I can't take the pressure
I feel like I want to burst,
I want to fight or die
it doesn't matter which comes first.

People want perfection
but I want to get it over with,
To get the job done
is my mission and not just a myth.

No one understands
the way that I am,
I'd like a new life
and get far away from my fam.

I feel imprisoned
as if I'm in a cage,
One day I will
unleash my hidden rage.

Copyright © Sonibe ... [ 2002-12-05 10:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Hidden Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:43:05 AM AEST
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You seem to have alot of pain and anger built up deep inside of you that it gives you thoughts of things that are unhumanly thinkable....i got part of the way i felt on that from the forum you started as well....i just wanted to say if you need to talk i don't mind listening....i think it's good to talk about how your feeling...try not to be to bottled up inside...i enjoy reading your work it's full of beauty....thanks for sharing it...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Hidden Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:02:55 PM AEST
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i know good work
when i read it ;*).

Re: Hidden Rage (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:15:20 PM AEST
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Great poem but you know how I feel before I even say it I've said it many times before!!

Darlene

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