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Array ( [sid] => 79938 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Last Slash [time] => 2005-01-14 22:48:13 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I cut again tonight.
You know with that bloody blade?
I couldn't help it.
I was feeling too much pain.

You all say you understand.
Why lie?
Why waste your own time?
After all, there's nothing you can do to make these scars go away.

My heart is still black.
It's barley beating.
I'm still cold and that same pain is growing.

Die!
Why can't I die!?
I know I've tried oh so many times!
Cutting.
Slashing.
Bleeding.
Crying.
All this and yet I'm still not dieing!

I hold that blade above my vain knowing that this is it.
This is the end.
I'm going to go.
So goodbye to all you who's never loved,
Never would hear me through.
Goodbye, this is my last!
For all you who think you've cared, this is my last slash! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 6 [informant] => AlurTemptation [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

My Last Slash

Contributed by AlurTemptation on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:48:13 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I cut again tonight.
You know with that bloody blade?
I couldn't help it.
I was feeling too much pain.

You all say you understand.
Why lie?
Why waste your own time?
After all, there's nothing you can do to make these scars go away.

My heart is still black.
It's barley beating.
I'm still cold and that same pain is growing.

Die!
Why can't I die!?
I know I've tried oh so many times!
Cutting.
Slashing.
Bleeding.
Crying.
All this and yet I'm still not dieing!

I hold that blade above my vain knowing that this is it.
This is the end.
I'm going to go.
So goodbye to all you who's never loved,
Never would hear me through.
Goodbye, this is my last!
For all you who think you've cared, this is my last slash!

Copyright © AlurTemptation ... [ 2005-01-14 22:48:13]
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Re: My Last Slash (User Rating: 1 )
by TheEarlyNovember on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:41:59 PM AEST
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It doesn't snow where your going

Re: My Last Slash (User Rating: 1 )
by Kalika on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 12:08:55 AM AEST
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Very well written, with a nice flow. but you should know that some ppl do understand, a lot of us here have been there before. If you need to talk I'm here and I'll listen.

Kali

Re: My Last Slash (User Rating: 1 )
by silent on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:34:31 AM AEST
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Nice expression of anger. Hope you don't really feel this way.

Re: My Last Slash (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldtsweetie33 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 08:21:03 PM AEST
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Good Write. you expressed yourself well. i feel the same at times. im here to talk if youd like to.

Re: My Last Slash (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 09:54:08 PM AEST
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So much anger.
Good write.

Re: My Last Slash (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 11:01:41 PM AEST
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very good poem..this was ritten extramly well...
tractorbabe

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