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Array ( [sid] => 79927 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One big waterslide [time] => 2005-01-14 21:33:04 [hometext] => Very personal and was difficult emotionally to write. [bodytext] => There within your walls of flame,
I remember forgetting almost everything.
It was so simple to nod off-so serene,
I believe i even gasped to stay awake.

Push, drill your music into my veins
Give it to me and dont take it away
What is it you need and i'll give it up
Reboundin so lets hit it from back to the front

Im blinking your smoke away
You need to stop that procrastnating
I had lunch with your mom already
And even all your friends hate me

So isnt this standard procedure?
Me sneeking out to play student/teacher?
If theres anything off here i wouldnt know
I've been through oblivion but still can blow

And now i sit here in denial
And i twiddle my fingers in question
Am i just an ignorant child
Or did i miss understand..........everything?

So now this sucks more then anything
I miss your clean breath and dirty clothes
I miss your pretty lips that everyone knows
I miss your smile and your unbreakable stare
I miss your cute laugh and.. where is your hair?
I miss your siren and the "***** you" show
I miss your purple staind sheets and your pillow
I miss your staircase and your ghettoness
I miss you raping me and the way you kissed
I miss your intensly short attention span
I miss you kazooka and your cut up hands
I miss you pacing around in a good way
I miss you calling me 2836293 times a day
I miss you most now that your gone
I miss you, freakin miss you, you jerk...
[comments] => 0 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 24 [informant] => LevyMetal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
One big waterslide

Contributed by LevyMetal on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:33:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



There within your walls of flame,
I remember forgetting almost everything.
It was so simple to nod off-so serene,
I believe i even gasped to stay awake.

Push, drill your music into my veins
Give it to me and dont take it away
What is it you need and i'll give it up
Reboundin so lets hit it from back to the front

Im blinking your smoke away
You need to stop that procrastnating
I had lunch with your mom already
And even all your friends hate me

So isnt this standard procedure?
Me sneeking out to play student/teacher?
If theres anything off here i wouldnt know
I've been through oblivion but still can blow

And now i sit here in denial
And i twiddle my fingers in question
Am i just an ignorant child
Or did i miss understand..........everything?

So now this sucks more then anything
I miss your clean breath and dirty clothes
I miss your pretty lips that everyone knows
I miss your smile and your unbreakable stare
I miss your cute laugh and.. where is your hair?
I miss your siren and the "***** you" show
I miss your purple staind sheets and your pillow
I miss your staircase and your ghettoness
I miss you raping me and the way you kissed
I miss your intensly short attention span
I miss you kazooka and your cut up hands
I miss you pacing around in a good way
I miss you calling me 2836293 times a day
I miss you most now that your gone
I miss you, freakin miss you, you jerk...




Copyright © LevyMetal ... [ 2005-01-14 21:33:04]
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