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Array ( [sid] => 79926 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 12 Step program [time] => 2005-01-14 21:27:40 [hometext] => Do you know drug addicts who become clean after rehab have their own bibles on why they dont need drugs? Yes, Bibles. [bodytext] => Never ment to be so "metaphorical",
But i see things so clearly now behind your passenger window,
Even the frame of the world seems so useless,
I smirk at this existance and come back to the time in your car.
And i move from the obvious-
I open my eyes and shut my mouth.
Im a bit ashamed to admit,
My mind wonders to exploring your skin.
Should i turn my head away? I think not.
Should you turn yourself in? Im game for it.
This was a great idea to contrast comparisons-
and im sure as hell fine with loving every minute of it.

Dont you dare turn that air conditioning up,
It'll clutter out the drones of the music im not listening to anyhow,
Its funny how your flooring it now,
The speed almost matches my current adrenaline-(and down shoots the bad habits again)

And im more then curious-
I sit patiently with open hands,
Content behind all that ink,
Makes me wonder why i didnt bother locking the door.
Can you feel me next to you still? Im numb.
Can you drive somewhere far away? Lets go...
And im over all that old fun and games
I just need a new realism to the machine behind breathing.

You seem so content behind all that ink,
Makes me wonder why i didnt crawl inside your car before. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 66 [informant] => LevyMetal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
12 Step program

Contributed by LevyMetal on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:27:40 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



Never ment to be so "metaphorical",
But i see things so clearly now behind your passenger window,
Even the frame of the world seems so useless,
I smirk at this existance and come back to the time in your car.
And i move from the obvious-
I open my eyes and shut my mouth.
Im a bit ashamed to admit,
My mind wonders to exploring your skin.
Should i turn my head away? I think not.
Should you turn yourself in? Im game for it.
This was a great idea to contrast comparisons-
and im sure as hell fine with loving every minute of it.

Dont you dare turn that air conditioning up,
It'll clutter out the drones of the music im not listening to anyhow,
Its funny how your flooring it now,
The speed almost matches my current adrenaline-(and down shoots the bad habits again)

And im more then curious-
I sit patiently with open hands,
Content behind all that ink,
Makes me wonder why i didnt bother locking the door.
Can you feel me next to you still? Im numb.
Can you drive somewhere far away? Lets go...
And im over all that old fun and games
I just need a new realism to the machine behind breathing.

You seem so content behind all that ink,
Makes me wonder why i didnt crawl inside your car before.




Copyright © LevyMetal ... [ 2005-01-14 21:27:40]
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Re: 12 Step program (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:32:00 PM AEST
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Ok often I am never confused but you lost me like a kidnapped child..So vauge and I have done the 12 step thing btw..And I must have missed this part of the mantra. But..If vauge were a poem sumission area then this is damn good..


Re: 12 Step program (User Rating: 1 )
by absentangel69 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:57:40 PM AEST
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man thats deep i think it's good though ...i wish i knew what you were going through




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