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Array ( [sid] => 79913 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost Farewell [time] => 2005-01-14 19:12:19 [hometext] => this is kinda bad i wrote it during my 1st period class in like 2 minutes [bodytext] => He screams....
I cry..
He says he hates me
I want to die
-the pain I feel is so stronge that im hollow inside
-it eats away at my every whim
-it becomes to much to bear
I say I hope he dies for all the lies and pain he has caused

I dont know what I have done....
I dont know what to do....
I am scared and lost... sitting on the cold floor of my bathroom

I walk to a cabnet and grab a blade
It is time to say farewell to the world...
because I dont know what I have done..

I slowly press the blade against my wrist
I slide it across my pale, white skin
blood imediately immerses from the wound...

it stings so bad - theres nothing left to do
Im lost in the world

I go a little deeper with the next slide of the blade
I begin to feel faint
My head gets woosy

I turn around
Lay my head on his bloody body
He is cold - with the knife sticking through his heart

I say farewell to my love
For I am lost without you

Everything begins to get darker
My breaths begin to shorten
and now....

Im Lost. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => doodley_5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Lost Farewell

Contributed by doodley_5 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:12:19 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



He screams....
I cry..
He says he hates me
I want to die
-the pain I feel is so stronge that im hollow inside
-it eats away at my every whim
-it becomes to much to bear
I say I hope he dies for all the lies and pain he has caused

I dont know what I have done....
I dont know what to do....
I am scared and lost... sitting on the cold floor of my bathroom

I walk to a cabnet and grab a blade
It is time to say farewell to the world...
because I dont know what I have done..

I slowly press the blade against my wrist
I slide it across my pale, white skin
blood imediately immerses from the wound...

it stings so bad - theres nothing left to do
Im lost in the world

I go a little deeper with the next slide of the blade
I begin to feel faint
My head gets woosy

I turn around
Lay my head on his bloody body
He is cold - with the knife sticking through his heart

I say farewell to my love
For I am lost without you

Everything begins to get darker
My breaths begin to shorten
and now....

Im Lost.




Copyright © doodley_5 ... [ 2005-01-14 19:12:19]
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Re: Lost Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by Wesley_Dale_Willis on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:38:19 PM AEST
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I really felt this poem, I also pray you never really do this to yourself. Keep writing and leave the blade alone. good luck...


Re: Lost Farewell (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:11:34 PM AEST
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This is about as deep as a puddle




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