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Array ( [sid] => 79888 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The dream [time] => 2005-01-14 16:36:49 [hometext] => Well, alot of spelling mistakes.. I am not a english man.. This is not a poem, guess I wrote a short story.. [bodytext] => I met you in the night
weaken sight agains the heart
Lost happiness
In the hand of Its absence.

Later you could forget everything else. You let me touch your heart. These glimpse cost me much, but you won - almost every time. I enjoyed the breezing breath against the silence, that beautiful with stopping up for to look again, you taught me. But you did not have to say it, just shivering fingers against hair, seeing waterfalls in eyes. As often as the moon was whole, you were mine.

I met you In the moments
Strength against the sore heart
with silence as a comfort
for what it was for

Then you gave yourself over. Even If the waves from the harbor and your often trips in the weeks, you promised me everyhing. My friends tried to get me our, but often I was sitting and waiting for you. I never knew when you would come home. I never knew.

You bought presents. Wealth in jewels and stones gave you the rights to be gone. I lived on a full moon. The fresh cold nights gave me faith and a clear sight. I lived on this, but the prints in the snow was easy to erase out of new snowflakes.
It was there you told me you loved me. Deep words was more than the air that gave mouth to talk them.

I met you in the yearning
hope and faith agains a true promise
Even if love
won my sense.


It was spring. The cold winter let it self overcome by dripping from trees. Not even a flower could be hidden. Not even a nest could stand empty. What a amazing life brought itself forward from the dark earth. But your hands you kept hidden until February. I trusted April until you said that my sense drowned in the dream in that ocean I loved you.

It got even more waves from the harbor, you searched for the lost oceans of mine. It were then I knew I never was going to see you again.

I met you in my dream
blended against the night in full moon.
Lost you out of sight
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The dream

Contributed by gothicangel on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:36:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



I met you in the night
weaken sight agains the heart
Lost happiness
In the hand of Its absence.

Later you could forget everything else. You let me touch your heart. These glimpse cost me much, but you won - almost every time. I enjoyed the breezing breath against the silence, that beautiful with stopping up for to look again, you taught me. But you did not have to say it, just shivering fingers against hair, seeing waterfalls in eyes. As often as the moon was whole, you were mine.

I met you In the moments
Strength against the sore heart
with silence as a comfort
for what it was for

Then you gave yourself over. Even If the waves from the harbor and your often trips in the weeks, you promised me everyhing. My friends tried to get me our, but often I was sitting and waiting for you. I never knew when you would come home. I never knew.

You bought presents. Wealth in jewels and stones gave you the rights to be gone. I lived on a full moon. The fresh cold nights gave me faith and a clear sight. I lived on this, but the prints in the snow was easy to erase out of new snowflakes.
It was there you told me you loved me. Deep words was more than the air that gave mouth to talk them.

I met you in the yearning
hope and faith agains a true promise
Even if love
won my sense.


It was spring. The cold winter let it self overcome by dripping from trees. Not even a flower could be hidden. Not even a nest could stand empty. What a amazing life brought itself forward from the dark earth. But your hands you kept hidden until February. I trusted April until you said that my sense drowned in the dream in that ocean I loved you.

It got even more waves from the harbor, you searched for the lost oceans of mine. It were then I knew I never was going to see you again.

I met you in my dream
blended against the night in full moon.
Lost you out of sight




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Re: The dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:47:46 PM AEST
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Despite the spelling errors, this is very good... thanks for sharing!


Re: The dream (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:50:33 PM AEST
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What words for a soul -mate one. Beautiful..and if spelling is the only thing worried about, then don't worry! You have talent.
Brew~




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