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Array ( [sid] => 79879 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why me? [time] => 2005-01-14 15:58:20 [hometext] => ummmmmmmmm.................... [bodytext] => Why can't you leave me here to die,
Just walk away and don't cover up your lies.
I don't want to see you or even hear you,
One excuse after another and that's all you do.
Don't tell me things just to get what you want,
Then leave me here hurting, while you smile and taunt.
I just wish you could be erased,
Everything about you your hair your voice your face.
You chase me and never let me go,
That's when you let your true side show.
You forced me to do this so you can live in bliss,
I've taken your knives and slit both my wrists.
But this time you can save me I cut them just right,
That in less then 10 minutes my day will be night.
So you can go on and play your little games,
And I hope you freak out at the sound of my name.
When you lay at night and it's happy dreams you seek,
Know that I might come to kill you too while you try to sleep

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why me?

Contributed by lovingkk05 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:58:20 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Why can't you leave me here to die,
Just walk away and don't cover up your lies.
I don't want to see you or even hear you,
One excuse after another and that's all you do.
Don't tell me things just to get what you want,
Then leave me here hurting, while you smile and taunt.
I just wish you could be erased,
Everything about you your hair your voice your face.
You chase me and never let me go,
That's when you let your true side show.
You forced me to do this so you can live in bliss,
I've taken your knives and slit both my wrists.
But this time you can save me I cut them just right,
That in less then 10 minutes my day will be night.
So you can go on and play your little games,
And I hope you freak out at the sound of my name.
When you lay at night and it's happy dreams you seek,
Know that I might come to kill you too while you try to sleep

Copyright © lovingkk05 ... [ 2005-01-14 15:58:20]
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Re: why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:29:13 PM AEST
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This is really sad. I can relate to this though. I have gotten better and was saved from death. Suicide isn't the answer. It will make things worse on you. If you need anyone to talk to, PM me.

Spazzo

Re: why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:04:29 PM AEST
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this is a deeply sading poem it makes me feel for you I am sorry that you have to go through this pain and I hope that you will be strong and pull through.

I like your stile focusing your writing on a single point and following through with it, but just knopw that we are here if you need to talk or need help just ask, be strong, God bless

wolfman

Re: why me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:19:16 PM AEST
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powerful and emotional. its not worth killing yourself over someone else. what does that solve? in life, the people you know change...

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