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Array ( [sid] => 79877 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Best Friend [time] => 2005-01-14 15:29:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Her words often paint
A monotonous day
Over layers of interpretation
And political office dilatation
Like dotted lines to break the hours
You have to look and listen
And no one else would understand
The way I am and
The way I want her

She thoughtfully deigns to portray
such artful friendship always there
and enshrines within her lines
a shroud of laughter with truthful care
Or at least impressionistic conception
with a pleasant demeanor that twirls
like we are two undisciplined silly girls
We realize Life is always made sweeter
with a friendship as such

Story of our highly-seasoned lives
with potential for serious down-fall
Bipolar ~ lacking decisions last minute made
under a prayer shawl
that neither one of us control

Because one thing
I know
Is that I don't always show
My true colors
Not out of deception but
mostly out of fear
But with her
my secrets are held dear
Delicate, dulcet, and light
should she repeat them to herself
The winged wonders uplift friends
and fly them through the night
As fixated erstwhile disguise falls off
No matter what we do, it could never be wrong

Her words often paint
more than the monotony of the day
and sometimes
I just need to say
"Thanks"
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Red_October [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
My Best Friend

Contributed by Red_October on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:29:26 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Her words often paint
A monotonous day
Over layers of interpretation
And political office dilatation
Like dotted lines to break the hours
You have to look and listen
And no one else would understand
The way I am and
The way I want her

She thoughtfully deigns to portray
such artful friendship always there
and enshrines within her lines
a shroud of laughter with truthful care
Or at least impressionistic conception
with a pleasant demeanor that twirls
like we are two undisciplined silly girls
We realize Life is always made sweeter
with a friendship as such

Story of our highly-seasoned lives
with potential for serious down-fall
Bipolar ~ lacking decisions last minute made
under a prayer shawl
that neither one of us control

Because one thing
I know
Is that I don't always show
My true colors
Not out of deception but
mostly out of fear
But with her
my secrets are held dear
Delicate, dulcet, and light
should she repeat them to herself
The winged wonders uplift friends
and fly them through the night
As fixated erstwhile disguise falls off
No matter what we do, it could never be wrong

Her words often paint
more than the monotony of the day
and sometimes
I just need to say
"Thanks"




Copyright © Red_October ... [ 2005-01-14 15:29:26]
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Re: My Best Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by silverpoppy on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:56:47 PM AEST
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hi, i came across your poem by accident, but im glad i did. its very decriptive and colourful. keep up the good work.


Re: My Best Friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 04:33:09 PM AEST
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So sweet and wonderful.

Spazzo




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