Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:16:29 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 79829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bruises On My Jaw [time] => 2005-01-14 02:10:59 [hometext] => kinda self explanatory really.... [bodytext] => bruises on my jaw
pain in my heart
you say you have nothing
you cant help tearing us apart
why do i love you
im sure i will never know
but ill probably still be with you
till old do i grow
its happened before it will happen again
you are a physco
and my life you will destroy
but you are my life partener
with or with out the joy
i know your life it was rough
and i know you try to be tough
but you are slowly killing me
and your words are poisioning me
and im losing all sense of reality
why do i chose this life
why do i help you hurt me
im feeling a little lost
but i stay why? and at what cost?
these questions i know ill never hear the answers
i will continue to be suffocated by your demanding ways
and i will always love you and hate you till my dieing days
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 13 [informant] => renstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bruises On My Jaw

Contributed by renstar on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 02:10:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

bruises on my jaw
pain in my heart
you say you have nothing
you cant help tearing us apart
why do i love you
im sure i will never know
but ill probably still be with you
till old do i grow
its happened before it will happen again
you are a physco
and my life you will destroy
but you are my life partener
with or with out the joy
i know your life it was rough
and i know you try to be tough
but you are slowly killing me
and your words are poisioning me
and im losing all sense of reality
why do i chose this life
why do i help you hurt me
im feeling a little lost
but i stay why? and at what cost?
these questions i know ill never hear the answers
i will continue to be suffocated by your demanding ways
and i will always love you and hate you till my dieing days

Copyright © renstar ... [ 2005-01-14 02:10:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Bruises On My Jaw (User Rating: 1 )
by Evening_Star on Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 11:08:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Your poem is well written and even though it is self explanatory i can almost feel exactly how you feel.
liz

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com