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Array ( [sid] => 79754 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lost [time] => 2005-01-13 16:59:33 [hometext] => enjoy [bodytext] => hurt and in pain
crying alone in the pouring rain
such a shame
playing the player's game

see nothing but black
everything is gone and will never come back
needing to turn my life upside down,and around
but i know i'll just end up crying on the cold hard ground

Lost and lonely
wrists are bloody
my life has wasted away
i'm going to end this with nothing to say

broken and bruised
and right fuzed
mad and angry
i'll never ever be happy

upset and depressed
i've been used my whole life
i'm picking up the knife
i'm so confused

lost and tourchered
shocked that life doesn't end
i don't need them as a friend
i'm more then depressed
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 32 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Lost

Contributed by savedbydeath on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:59:33 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

hurt and in pain
crying alone in the pouring rain
such a shame
playing the player's game

see nothing but black
everything is gone and will never come back
needing to turn my life upside down,and around
but i know i'll just end up crying on the cold hard ground

Lost and lonely
wrists are bloody
my life has wasted away
i'm going to end this with nothing to say

broken and bruised
and right fuzed
mad and angry
i'll never ever be happy

upset and depressed
i've been used my whole life
i'm picking up the knife
i'm so confused

lost and tourchered
shocked that life doesn't end
i don't need them as a friend
i'm more then depressed

Copyright © savedbydeath ... [ 2005-01-13 16:59:33]
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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by cheech on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 08:52:56 PM AEST
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well well well.,what have we have here?this is a very weird interesting write,i thought things were going well for ya,well i hope they r and this is just a poem u wrote a long time ago.well anyways...i liked this,keep writing,just not like this,more happiness is needed in this cold world,love u babyz

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Re: Lost (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 12:17:42 AM AEST
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good write but sad :-( be happy and im on where r u now geeze well hey wrire happy stuff i am lol love ya

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