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[sid] => 79741
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Crimson Fantasies
[time] => 2005-01-13 15:19:42
[hometext] => Hmmm.... I think the title speaks for itself, let's put it that way...
[bodytext] => Punish me, ravage me, love me,
Wrench my chains,
Force me to bow at your feet…
Calm my desires,
Lend me your lips just once,
Give me your body…
Bittersweet agony, this yearning…
Twist me in any direction,
Do as you please…
Kiss me, caress me, tear me,
Make the blood flow…
Have a taste,
Relish the moment,
Sip my pain…
Delicious, this scarlet wine…
Beautiful, this tale of pain and pleasure…
Fulfill my sinful longings,
Whisper my name sweetly…
Awake the monster within,
And drown in my sea of lust…
Open the door, step right in…
A realm of infinite Night,
A dance with Death…
Kiss Temptation,
Fall into Her merciless grasp…
Take a look in the mirror,
What do you see?
I know you…
You’re me…
Feed from my sorrow,
Revel from my passion,
Suffocate in my splendor…
Sacrifice yourself to me,
And I will show you a world of Immortality…
Where darkness is your sanctuary,
And blood is the life…
Succumb to my hidden desires,
Fulfill my crimson fantasies…
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 179
[topic] => 13
[informant] => FleurdeSang
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 10
[ratings] => 2
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DarkPoetry
)
Crimson Fantasies
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:19:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Punish me, ravage me, love me,
Wrench my chains,
Force me to bow at your feet…
Calm my desires,
Lend me your lips just once,
Give me your body…
Bittersweet agony, this yearning…
Twist me in any direction,
Do as you please…
Kiss me, caress me, tear me,
Make the blood flow…
Have a taste,
Relish the moment,
Sip my pain…
Delicious, this scarlet wine…
Beautiful, this tale of pain and pleasure…
Fulfill my sinful longings,
Whisper my name sweetly…
Awake the monster within,
And drown in my sea of lust…
Open the door, step right in…
A realm of infinite Night,
A dance with Death…
Kiss Temptation,
Fall into Her merciless grasp…
Take a look in the mirror,
What do you see?
I know you…
You’re me…
Feed from my sorrow,
Revel from my passion,
Suffocate in my splendor…
Sacrifice yourself to me,
And I will show you a world of Immortality…
Where darkness is your sanctuary,
And blood is the life…
Succumb to my hidden desires,
Fulfill my crimson fantasies…
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-01-13 15:19:42]
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:29:06 PM AEST
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| This works for me on many levals |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:33:02 PM AEST
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wow I really admire your work, grreat write
pixie xx |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:52:15 PM AEST
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| well..I started to say over, under and through..or twist and shout..then found it went much deeper.. so I ..just decided on my ..great write..but that's so..normal. I could give you roses..but we all know that's been taken.. and I can't scream out with desire..or can I.. hmm ya know Stephy.. I want to be tied with silk ropes.. or play the wanton before I die..but times tickin'.. and wrinkles form..no one wants a wrinkled old whore.. I don't think..but I ramble... |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by wolfman on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:02:03 PM AEST
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this is deeply shocking how you speak of your self in the third person and personify your desired, these thoughts that haunt you will pass keep faith and dont give up.
I have yeat to read a poem like this it speaks on so many leavel to to and how it pertrayes you emotions, this is going to be one of my favoret poems of all, thank you for sharing with us. do post agin soon God bless
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:31:17 PM AEST
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Every once in a while I hear the voices in my head responding or reading someone elses words ... It happens here. A different voice for each line ... maybe four, no five voices. The fifth voice always reads the last two lines of every stanza. They are patterned all the same.
Lines 1& 5 - voice one
Lines 2 & 6 - voice two
Lines 3 & 7 - voice three
Lines 4 & the bridge - voice four
Lines 8 & 9 voice five
Each stanza starts out slow, soft and as the voices trade off, each one speaks a little louder, a little bit faster than the voice before ...crescendoing to the 7th line ... then 8 and 9 are spoken quiet, and wistfully seductive. I see this performed on a dark stage in my head. The voices each have their own spotlight and are separated from each other, so the lights flash back and forth with a near strobe effect.
I can't say why, but this is how these words affected me. Amazing power within these lines Steph, to awaken all of that within my head.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:18:49 AM AEST
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Wow felt the immense passion in this.
Calm my desires,
Lend me your lips just once,
Give me your body…
Bittersweet agony, this yearning…
Twist me in any direction,
Do as you please…
Such longing and desire. Take me now voiced in your words.
Another masterpiece of poetry in motion.
I loved it
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:09:26 AM AEST
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| Eroticism and darkness, all in one poem. Nicely done too! Cheers! |
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Re: Crimson Fantasies
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:49:07 PM AEST
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Stephy...what can I say...Awsome!!!
Arousing and frightening all in one package.
Again...awsome!!! |
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