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Array ( [sid] => 79720 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crying [time] => 2005-01-13 11:49:53 [hometext] => It's about my friend, she has many friends but none of them really care.. [bodytext] => She’s crying
Sitting in her room
Looking out the window
Tears in her eyes

She’s crying
Hoping for a new begin
Hoping for an ending
An ending of the pain

Why would she stop her life
Why would she go on
Why would she stop with crying
And why should she smile

These questions in her head
They’re killing her inside
She doesn’t have the answers
She doesn’t have the time

She is still crying
Bleeding inside
Killing herself
Waiting for time

But no one sees it
She’s the populair girl
Everyone likes her
But no one cares
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Crying

Contributed by lostinside on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:49:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

She’s crying
Sitting in her room
Looking out the window
Tears in her eyes

She’s crying
Hoping for a new begin
Hoping for an ending
An ending of the pain

Why would she stop her life
Why would she go on
Why would she stop with crying
And why should she smile

These questions in her head
They’re killing her inside
She doesn’t have the answers
She doesn’t have the time

She is still crying
Bleeding inside
Killing herself
Waiting for time

But no one sees it
She’s the populair girl
Everyone likes her
But no one cares

Copyright Â© lostinside ... [ 2005-01-13 11:49:53]
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Re: Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:58:05 AM AEST
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I don't know what to say here..it kind of takes my breath away and leaves me speechless.. I know people like this. It's a facade..great job.

Re: Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:02:24 PM AEST
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deep and very emotionally charged, expressed well,
pix xx

Re: Crying (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldtsweetie33 on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:28:38 PM AEST
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it sounds like it could be a song. good write

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