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It’s my own desire that makes me fly higher
I’m on cloud nine, when I’m with you
But am I wasting my time, putting up with you?
I wish you’d love me, as I love you
But you don’t know me, nor have a clue

I love the way, you seduce me with your charms
Right before you hold me, tight in your arms
You’re passing up our chance
Kinda like missing the last dance
I hope you realize soon
That no one else can love you, the way I do you.
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My Desire

Contributed by o7neves on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:15:16 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Your presence warms me like fire
It’s my own desire that makes me fly higher
I’m on cloud nine, when I’m with you
But am I wasting my time, putting up with you?
I wish you’d love me, as I love you
But you don’t know me, nor have a clue

I love the way, you seduce me with your charms
Right before you hold me, tight in your arms
You’re passing up our chance
Kinda like missing the last dance
I hope you realize soon
That no one else can love you, the way I do you.

Copyright Â© o7neves ... [ 2005-01-13 02:15:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:34:23 AM AEST
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feelin this poem alot. personally it's alittle confusin due to my lack of poetic skills (lol) or maybe while i'm readin, i'm takin it literally which makes the situation confusin. Keep Writin so i can Keep Readin. 33

Re: My Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:51:02 AM AEST
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thats really sweet .

Re: My Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:52:42 AM AEST
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i like this poem a lot, i can really relate to it. Did he ever figure it out? ;)

Re: My Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:05:13 AM AEST
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Did he ever figure it out? Hmmm who the heck knows!!! LoL All i know is that he'll probably never know what love is, and I was the idiot that allowed him to do anything and everything all b/c I was "inlove" and havent gotten over him yet. Of course now he's in the marines, and in Iraq so that sux even more.
~TD~

Re: My Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:38:10 AM AEST
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Wow that was such a sweet write, writen well too.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: My Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:37:32 AM AEST
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a very good write
[x]

Re: My Desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Jezabel on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:32:40 AM AEST
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sweet & true luv

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