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My heart just flutters
My tongue gets twisted
My words just clutter
Every time we meet
My heart skips a beat
My knees get weak
Cemented firm my feet
When I'm with you
Nothing else exists
Your warm gentle embrace
Your kiss an essence of gist
When I'm in your arms
My heart just melts
The night stirs with passion
As desires of lust are felt
When I'm with you
In your safe haven i shall stay
Living an eternity
Of love until my dying day [comments] => 7 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mina-1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

When I'm With You....

Contributed by mina-1 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:45:06 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When I look into your eyes
My heart just flutters
My tongue gets twisted
My words just clutter
Every time we meet
My heart skips a beat
My knees get weak
Cemented firm my feet
When I'm with you
Nothing else exists
Your warm gentle embrace
Your kiss an essence of gist
When I'm in your arms
My heart just melts
The night stirs with passion
As desires of lust are felt
When I'm with you
In your safe haven i shall stay
Living an eternity
Of love until my dying day

Copyright © mina-1 ... [ 2005-01-12 23:45:06]
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Re: When I'm With You.... (User Rating: 1 )
by O7NeVeS on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:54:40 AM AEST
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I liked how this poem flowed and found it to be sooo lovely. Beautiful write! TD

Re: When I'm With You.... (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:29:18 AM AEST
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this poem rolls off the tongue real well, very nice write :)

Re: When I'm With You.... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:22:28 AM AEST
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awww beautiful and soft,
pix xx

Re: When I'm With You.... (User Rating: 1 )
by jmpy84 on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:30:51 PM AEST
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wonderful write

Re: When I'm With You.... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 10:02:15 AM AEST
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Spoken with the purity and honesty of true child like
innocence, in short, a masterpeice of writting and
display of true emotions . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: When I'm With You.... (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 03:14:19 PM AEST
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very sweet poem. very heartful and beautiful.
i very thoroughly enjoyed this . well written.
5 stars
Arden

Re: When I'm With You.... (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 07:47:46 AM AEST
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Isn't it beautiful to be so in love. Nicely written
take care

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