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Tickling down my chin
Drunk of you I have
Taken you deep within
Now your life is mine
For within each drop I consume
Leaves you bleeding profusely
Drenching my senses through and through

Trickling little droplet of crimson
Sweet aching life to wash through me anew
Life giving candy I draw from you
Within each deadly kiss placed upon your neck
Fill me ever more, my love, with your undying soul
Your body grows cold now, within my loving arms
That cradle your dying flesh with lips upon a tender neck
Glassy eyes stare blankly now
At the ceiling that hovers above
So full of stars at midnight
With the moon and her silvery light

Take your dying breath, my dear
For this be your last upon this earth
And twilight beckons you hither
While the sun sets upon your life eternal

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A Vampire's Last Pledge

Contributed by taintedsoul on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:37:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Trickling little droplets of crimson
Tickling down my chin
Drunk of you I have
Taken you deep within
Now your life is mine
For within each drop I consume
Leaves you bleeding profusely
Drenching my senses through and through

Trickling little droplet of crimson
Sweet aching life to wash through me anew
Life giving candy I draw from you
Within each deadly kiss placed upon your neck
Fill me ever more, my love, with your undying soul
Your body grows cold now, within my loving arms
That cradle your dying flesh with lips upon a tender neck
Glassy eyes stare blankly now
At the ceiling that hovers above
So full of stars at midnight
With the moon and her silvery light

Take your dying breath, my dear
For this be your last upon this earth
And twilight beckons you hither
While the sun sets upon your life eternal

2002

Copyright © taintedsoul ... [ 2005-01-12 22:37:25]
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Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:58:00 PM AEST
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a really good write. I enjoyed reading ur poem
keep writing
cheers,
sue

PS.reminds me of the vampires in the movies

Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by Kratur on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:37:17 AM AEST
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its actually pretty weird... i remember reading this poem on your site
*loved that sexy vamp chick pic*
nostalgia is cool

fix the links on your page please soulless!
you have fans you know!!

Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:59:14 AM AEST
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Very creative vampire write i really liked it.

Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by artostuff on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:50:16 AM AEST
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I like this, its has a nice melencholy romantic feel to it. Wonderful imagery. I also like the last line,
"While the sun sets upon your life eternal"

Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:25:14 AM AEST
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I just love vampire writes, I struggle with writitng them, that was amazingly dark and I really loved reading
pix xx

Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:04:29 AM AEST
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Good write they keep me reading

Re: A Vampire's Last Pledge (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:35:25 AM AEST
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I love vampires and this was a very good write.. Vampires are awesum!!

~:: christina ::~ good job!!

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