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Array ( [sid] => 79635 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Desolate Soul [time] => 2005-01-12 18:48:12 [hometext] => At the time i wrote this i was using drugs to cover up my past but when i wasnt high it all came rushing back (go figure;) and the way i dealt with it was writing. please comment [bodytext] => The whirl wind my life has become
Isnt that way for everyone
When your rock wall falls to the floor
Becomes harder to keep that lock on your door
The say that life isnt fair
Its just not that easy when nobody cares
You sink down slowly alone
Drifting away in this vicious cyclone
When nothing makes scense and nothing really matters
This life is like a game of snakes and latters
Somedays your up some your down
Sometimes it's harder to smile through the frown
So lost and out of place
In the mirror an unrecognizable face
Everything's so sureal and my head spins
So afraid to loose but i'll never win
Just wait for my head to shatter
Shaking inside as my jaw chatters
Darkness pain and iscolated alone
Watching my emotions fly and think as i go to my zone
Falling from reality and out into oblivion
Hold on and just observe this creation
Until my time runs dry
Watching as people slowly drift by
Away from me away from the pain
Away from the chaos away from this game
Now as i close my eyes and break
A part of me prays that tomorrow they will not wake [comments] => 2 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 61 [informant] => MorbidDeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Desolate Soul

Contributed by MorbidDeath on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



The whirl wind my life has become
Isnt that way for everyone
When your rock wall falls to the floor
Becomes harder to keep that lock on your door
The say that life isnt fair
Its just not that easy when nobody cares
You sink down slowly alone
Drifting away in this vicious cyclone
When nothing makes scense and nothing really matters
This life is like a game of snakes and latters
Somedays your up some your down
Sometimes it's harder to smile through the frown
So lost and out of place
In the mirror an unrecognizable face
Everything's so sureal and my head spins
So afraid to loose but i'll never win
Just wait for my head to shatter
Shaking inside as my jaw chatters
Darkness pain and iscolated alone
Watching my emotions fly and think as i go to my zone
Falling from reality and out into oblivion
Hold on and just observe this creation
Until my time runs dry
Watching as people slowly drift by
Away from me away from the pain
Away from the chaos away from this game
Now as i close my eyes and break
A part of me prays that tomorrow they will not wake




Copyright © MorbidDeath ... [ 2005-01-12 18:48:12]
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Re: Desolate Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by dragondaughter on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:04:49 PM AEST
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Just a note on spelling that I noticed "iscolated" is isolated...but other then that it's a very strong piece...I find writing helps me get my emotions out...even if no one catches all the meanings behind my words...I really like this. Well done!


Re: Desolate Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:07:25 AM AEST
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This is a very well written piece of work.And i hope you can find peace with writing then doing drugs.take care.




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