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Array ( [sid] => 79622 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Addicted to blood [time] => 2005-01-12 17:41:43 [hometext] => everyones deep down addiction [bodytext] => Helplessly restrained, you beg for life
Your begs make me laugh
Screams resounding off of every wall
As i approach you with my knife
You look so pathetic, tears mixed with sweat
Prepare to feel pain

As i finish my first cut,
Watching as the blood drips on my feet
I wonder how it must feel like
Helplessly tortured, praying for death
The very thought makes me smile
The smile hurting you more than my knife

As i start cutting, releasing blood
Organs begin to drop out,
You see deaths sickly grin, go with no fear
Your screams and cries are ignored
As are your tears,
Falling into the pool of blood beneath you

My lust will never be fulfilled,
I begin to taste the blood, Divine sweetness
You are now dead, you died for no reason
The tears have all fallen, the blood has dripped away
I look at my masterpiece, relishing in my accomplishment
When will my next craving begin, who's to die next?

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 13 [informant] => blacksabbath026 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Addicted to blood

Contributed by blacksabbath026 on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:41:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Helplessly restrained, you beg for life
Your begs make me laugh
Screams resounding off of every wall
As i approach you with my knife
You look so pathetic, tears mixed with sweat
Prepare to feel pain

As i finish my first cut,
Watching as the blood drips on my feet
I wonder how it must feel like
Helplessly tortured, praying for death
The very thought makes me smile
The smile hurting you more than my knife

As i start cutting, releasing blood
Organs begin to drop out,
You see deaths sickly grin, go with no fear
Your screams and cries are ignored
As are your tears,
Falling into the pool of blood beneath you

My lust will never be fulfilled,
I begin to taste the blood, Divine sweetness
You are now dead, you died for no reason
The tears have all fallen, the blood has dripped away
I look at my masterpiece, relishing in my accomplishment
When will my next craving begin, who's to die next?

Copyright © blacksabbath026 ... [ 2005-01-12 17:41:43]
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Re: Addicted to blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Diatribe on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:59:30 PM AEST
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I'm addicted to blood too... I think I'd probably die without it.

Re: Addicted to blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Tracy_Lords on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:31:19 PM AEST
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I'm not into that bukkake stuff!
ick!

xox...Tracy

Re: Addicted to blood (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:35:16 PM AEST
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Not really a comment to the the poem..Even though I know damn well it was about freakin bukkake..Does this girl even have a clue what bukkake is?

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