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Dying, crying
Seeking for console
But finding only agony
My mind is wondering
Im confused but pondering
The existence of my soul
As death takes its toll
Im a fugitive
Running from my life
Escaping somehow
Digging a deeper hole
Im being enticed
Into this dark world
Slowly slipping away
From misery and pain
I whisper my last wish
My soft lips give my last kiss
And I wonder, for the rest of time
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Will Anyone Remember?

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

As I lie on this bed
Dying, crying
Seeking for console
But finding only agony
My mind is wondering
Im confused but pondering
The existence of my soul
As death takes its toll
Im a fugitive
Running from my life
Escaping somehow
Digging a deeper hole
Im being enticed
Into this dark world
Slowly slipping away
From misery and pain
I whisper my last wish
My soft lips give my last kiss
And I wonder, for the rest of time
Will anyone remember this crime?

Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-01-12 15:13:58]
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Re: Will Anyone Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:21:14 PM AEST
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a quick thought about taking ones life, yes there are those who would rember and rember well they would of what went wrong and if there was something that they could have done or did.

this was a good poem easy to read and very simple I did enjoy reading it please post again soon

wolfman

Re: Will Anyone Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:32:51 PM AEST
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Thanks for the comment and the reply. I try to write about what people could relate to. Alot of people who have the thoughts of suicide wonder if anyone would even care..and this was what I was feeling at the time, also.

Re: Will Anyone Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:04:47 PM AEST
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Hehe, a repost. Still a great write. Hehe. And people will remember, people will cry.

Scott

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