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Apon the barron land we call Earth,
Full of strange creatures like none have ever seen,
Live but not living at the same time,
On the outside living on with daily life,
Never questioning why it has to be,
But on the inside thry are rotting and dying every moment that passes,
Passing out of this world never to return,
Till they have become nothing but an empty shell,
Shackled to this world by emotions,
Shuch as pleasing others around them,
Unable to break it in feble attempts,
However there are a few,
Whom have broken free,
Spreading wings of beauty and passion,
To blow where the wind directs them,
Hinder not thoes who fly,
But incurage or think,
Of how you can spread wings of your own,
And fly into the setting sun,
Below watchful eyes in the sky,
Over the world of Zombies. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Arius-Inues [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

World Of Zombies

Contributed by Arius-Inues on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Eyes in the sky peering down,
Apon the barron land we call Earth,
Full of strange creatures like none have ever seen,
Live but not living at the same time,
On the outside living on with daily life,
Never questioning why it has to be,
But on the inside thry are rotting and dying every moment that passes,
Passing out of this world never to return,
Till they have become nothing but an empty shell,
Shackled to this world by emotions,
Shuch as pleasing others around them,
Unable to break it in feble attempts,
However there are a few,
Whom have broken free,
Spreading wings of beauty and passion,
To blow where the wind directs them,
Hinder not thoes who fly,
But incurage or think,
Of how you can spread wings of your own,
And fly into the setting sun,
Below watchful eyes in the sky,
Over the world of Zombies.

Copyright © Arius-Inues ... [ 2005-01-12 15:01:35]
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Re: World Of Zombies (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 07:13:20 PM AEST
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Sorry for a second I assumed this may be good.

Re: World Of Zombies (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 08:03:39 PM AEST
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this poem just seems to not do anything but define what a zombie is and then demand the reader to think your way. this poem is basically unsavable, because i still cannot find a good thing in it. you have typos, misspelled words, a freestyle that basically makes me think that you gave an attempt at rhyming in format and failed, and a poorly displayed theme. stanzas would also be really helpful in this piece so it doesnt seem like you are just rambling on.

Re: World Of Zombies (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 04:04:02 PM AEST
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hmm, a bit complicated...

Re: World Of Zombies (User Rating: 1 )
by Lips on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 04:21:49 AM AEST
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I didnt quite understand what you wanted to say .

Re: World Of Zombies (User Rating: 1 )
by Somnium on Saturday, 6th May 2006 @ 05:59:28 AM AEST
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Odd...but good

Ben

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