Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 15:28:03 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 79585 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Box of Sweets [time] => 2005-01-12 13:11:02 [hometext] => This is dedicated to the crap on the radio [bodytext] => Kids just say "No"
To the new drug dealer that's pushin' crack on the radio
They get you hooked with the high from your very first taste
And don't it feel great as the sugar
Rushes through your blood and corrupts your brain
Diabetes of the ear: a distaste for change
For sake of good health as far as sugar goes
Sometime's it's best just for Momma to say No

You're no Fun
I hope you realize that I am getting bored
From all that crap you've shoveled in my mouth
It all tastes the same
Bitter like gasoline but that started off as sweet
And now my tounge is growing sour

Repetitive
Is the key word when you deal with the attack of the obnoxious
Hum the tune as it crawls under your skin
Kind of like Pop and Circumstance played at graduation
I can't resist
That's Satan in the morning drive: I need his medicine to stay alive
The fad
The prize
The next in line
Look the old in the eyes: tell them shut up and goodbye

Destroy the Devil's sweets
By any means necessary
Like candy rots your teeth you'll rot your brain
Too much sugar makes me sick... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 56 [informant] => subgenius [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => sarcasticpoetry )
Box of Sweets

Contributed by subgenius on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:11:02 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry



Kids just say "No"
To the new drug dealer that's pushin' crack on the radio
They get you hooked with the high from your very first taste
And don't it feel great as the sugar
Rushes through your blood and corrupts your brain
Diabetes of the ear: a distaste for change
For sake of good health as far as sugar goes
Sometime's it's best just for Momma to say No

You're no Fun
I hope you realize that I am getting bored
From all that crap you've shoveled in my mouth
It all tastes the same
Bitter like gasoline but that started off as sweet
And now my tounge is growing sour

Repetitive
Is the key word when you deal with the attack of the obnoxious
Hum the tune as it crawls under your skin
Kind of like Pop and Circumstance played at graduation
I can't resist
That's Satan in the morning drive: I need his medicine to stay alive
The fad
The prize
The next in line
Look the old in the eyes: tell them shut up and goodbye

Destroy the Devil's sweets
By any means necessary
Like candy rots your teeth you'll rot your brain
Too much sugar makes me sick...




Copyright © subgenius ... [ 2005-01-12 13:11:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Box of Sweets (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:24:22 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
What a great way to express your dislike of things. What a way with words you have. This is great.
Blu


Re: Box of Sweets (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:28:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Indeed, although one should have faith in new music. *nods*

Nice poem, sub.
Keep writing.


Re: Box of Sweets (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:58:50 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
too much sugar makes me sick....

i feel like this so much sometimes...




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com