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Loathe myself enough,

Now this has made it so tough.

Wasted friendship,

A world changing grip.

I can feel a sickness inside,

I am sorry I ever lied.

I am far from perfect.

I cause a lot of conflict.

An unhealthy element of life,

Causing a whole load of strife.

You should walk away,

No one should ever stay.

An obscure entity

SJ

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Obscure entity

Contributed by little_genna on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:07:29 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Loathe myself enough,

Now this has made it so tough.

Wasted friendship,

A world changing grip.

I can feel a sickness inside,

I am sorry I ever lied.

I am far from perfect.

I cause a lot of conflict.

An unhealthy element of life,

Causing a whole load of strife.

You should walk away,

No one should ever stay.

An obscure entity

SJ

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Re: Obscure entity (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:29:11 PM AEST
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Just a word of advice, don't be so hard on yourself. We all make mistakes. I hope things get better for you. I'm hear if you need to talk.
Hugs
Blu

Re: Obscure entity (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:33:10 PM AEST
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a very sad and dark write, hope your pain eases for you soon *hugs*
pix xx

Re: Obscure entity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:17:50 AM AEST
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Such sadness in your words. Always remember when one door ends. A new one always opens. Keep your head up.... A truly beautiful poem.

Re: Obscure entity (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:26:09 AM AEST
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I am real sorry that I weren't there. We should meet so we can catch up on things either way.

Re: Obscure entity (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:45:24 AM AEST
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you are so much more....beautiful....wish u could see through my eyes

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