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[aid] => mick
[title] => Give Me Three Weeks
[time] => 2005-01-11 23:40:16
[hometext] => I wrote this poem over a 4 day period erasing and rewriting until it was just how i felt for that pint in time when i really messed up bigger than usual. my first attempt at this type of poetry comment please
[bodytext] => Give me three weeks i need time to think Were the word running through her head as she sipped on her drink Pain ran through as emptiness flow As she thought to herself "how low will you go" Why do you hurt those who you love How she longed for his touch as she reached up above Onto a shelf she pulled down a frame Again and again crying his name She traced his face as she touched the cold glass She remembered the time they'd sat together in class He was quiet and didnt ever say much And then she thought of the time they walked together at lunch The time they'd spent had gone by so fast And as she sat she pondered the past But she had no regrets Except for the mess behind her she'd left She wished for his arms to just hold her tight And once again tell her she'd be alright She remembered his eyes so deep and true Her heart melted again into a puddle of blue Their memories together seemed so far away She wanted so bad to go back to those days He was so strong and he held her so high Thinking of this now brought tears to her eyes She thought of all the late afternoon walks Where they would just sit on the bleachers on talk As she looked out the window it started to rain And a memory rushed back to her once again It was one that she held so close and so dear She just tried to keep back her salt water tears Under a tin roof when he held her so close Even though he didnt know that was what she needed the most But all of this fun crashed to a hault And once again she was souly at fault But this time was bigger far different than before This time would ruin and wreck things much more She asked him if it could be repaired She looked deep in his eyes and felt her heart tear He said give me three weeks i need time to think She nooded but inside her stomach just kinked So now she sits alone in the dark Watching her world just fall apart Knowing there is nothing more she can do Her heart is already so cold and so blue She misses her lover but mostly her friend To think she did something that may cause it to end Now all she can do is just sit and wait But with each passing night she stays up late Wishing and longing for him to be there Just to be able to touch his soft hair And now as she slowly lays down to sleep She will fight to stay strong and try not to weep Those tears of hers filled with guilt and pure sorrow So she'll be ready to put onn her mask for tomorrow So that nobody knows and nobody sees The pain that she hides deep down beneath [comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 55 [informant] => MorbidDeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
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