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Lost in the dark
as I feel eyes following me,
surrounded by ghastly moans
they won't let me be.

Eyes follow me
most every night,
glowing crimson eyes
such a horrible sight.

I feel as though
I'm trapped within my dreams,
noone there to hear
my frightning screams.

Lost in the dark
when I enter my dreams,
glowing crimson eyes
always following me.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
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Lost In The Dark

Contributed by Cynthia on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:26:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Lost in the dark
as I feel eyes following me,
surrounded by ghastly moans
they won't let me be.

Eyes follow me
most every night,
glowing crimson eyes
such a horrible sight.

I feel as though
I'm trapped within my dreams,
noone there to hear
my frightning screams.

Lost in the dark
when I enter my dreams,
glowing crimson eyes
always following me.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Jan.9/2005

Copyright © Cynthia ... [ 2005-01-11 20:26:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lost In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:36:39 PM AEST
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Very good post..I loved the last stanza here..

Re: Lost In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 08:42:35 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this,good write

Re: Lost In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:04:13 PM AEST
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excellent write. i do believe that you have a talent for writing about any topic and in any format. =]

Re: Lost In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by shamateur on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:09:42 PM AEST
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I really liked this, sometimes it seems like there is no on to hear your screams. Excellent job

Re: Lost In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:09:47 PM AEST
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this has such a devious feel to it. Reminds me of a nightmare that pops up from time to time. Great write.

peace
TS

Re: Lost In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:22:53 AM AEST
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brillaint and dark Cynthia, I loved this alot :)
pixie xx

Re: Lost In The Dark (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 07:31:34 PM AEST
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Awesome write. Good job.

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