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Array ( [sid] => 79475 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So New [time] => 2005-01-11 18:31:03 [hometext] => I don't really like this one...so comments and suggestions are most welcome [bodytext] => Things are so new that I often forget
And say many things that I really regret
I’m still learning the things that you’re sensitive about
Because the last thing I want to make you do is pout
I don’t want to hurt you that’s not even a thought in my mind
All I want is for you to hold me and be no one else’s but mine
I wish you were at my side all day long
But we both know that couldn’t happen it’d be all wrong
If only you knew how incredibly deeply I care for you
You would run in the opposite direction as if I screamed “BOO!”
Then again I could be mistaken
Instead you may feel as if you’re in heaven
I hope your feelings are the latter of the two
Because if they weren’t I’d definitely feel blue
Funny thing is, I’m not really concerned
Cuz I feel as though I’m the one that is yearned
And for some odd reason I am not the least bit worried
Because I feel as though one day we’ll be married
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So New

Contributed by O7NeVeS on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Things are so new that I often forget
And say many things that I really regret
I’m still learning the things that you’re sensitive about
Because the last thing I want to make you do is pout
I don’t want to hurt you that’s not even a thought in my mind
All I want is for you to hold me and be no one else’s but mine
I wish you were at my side all day long
But we both know that couldn’t happen it’d be all wrong
If only you knew how incredibly deeply I care for you
You would run in the opposite direction as if I screamed “BOO!”
Then again I could be mistaken
Instead you may feel as if you’re in heaven
I hope your feelings are the latter of the two
Because if they weren’t I’d definitely feel blue
Funny thing is, I’m not really concerned
Cuz I feel as though I’m the one that is yearned
And for some odd reason I am not the least bit worried
Because I feel as though one day we’ll be married

Copyright Â© O7NeVeS ... [ 2005-01-11 18:31:03]
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Re: So New (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:48:01 PM AEST
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Coud have been more to it..You clumped it all up into one big mess..The subject is good other then that..Other then the fact that love does not exsist.

Re: So New (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 12:10:49 AM AEST
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I,on the other hand,do believe that love exists,and I think this poem was nice to read.You poured your heart into it,which made it a very heartfelt write.
PumpkinPie

Re: So New (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilcaf on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:26:21 AM AEST
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I lke this poem, can relate to it alot. well written and i hope things go well for you xx

Re: So New (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:03:04 PM AEST
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i dont know what afterdark is talking about, love definitely exists. obviously he or she has never felt it. besides that fact i think this poem was wonderful, some parts could have been done a little better, but all and all i thought it was great.
Curtisc

Re: So New (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:45:22 PM AEST
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Love is a *choice* we make, to devote (or not) ourselves to someone we lust after - at least in the case of intimate relationships. It exists because we make it so. Anyway, I think it may need some division and perhaps the lines are a bit long. But if that's your style, so be it. It's really an okay poem. Cheers!

Re: So New (User Rating: 1 )
by Dec2three198five on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:41:31 PM AEST
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I like this one. Who is this about? 33

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