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Array ( [sid] => 79473 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A lonely souls one desire [time] => 2005-01-11 18:12:29 [hometext] => Comments, Suggetstions, and Corrections are welcome. Also thanks to Doriens_picture for the help. [bodytext] => The sun begins to fade
As I sit under a tree
Protected by it's shade
I realize my haven isn't free

Not knowing what to think
As I begin to tremble
Unable to blink
As I start to remember

Images of my past run through my mind
As it's myself I'm trying to find
So give me space and give me time
For it's the only thing I can't waste
I didn't leave in a haste
But still i found a bitter taste

I'm broken and colder than hell
Not able to tell
What happened long ago
I run to and fro
From my fear I have nowhere to go
Trying to hide but still wondering why
Fear and fate must sometime collide
Confronting my past will only make me crash
For once they know I become trash

Picture perfect is what i may seem
Wishing I were living a dream
Where everone was perfect
And everything a true fit

But dreams grow dark
Without the spark
That starts the fire
A lonely souls one desire [comments] => 5 [counter] => 271 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Gothchyk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

A lonely souls one desire

Contributed by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:12:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The sun begins to fade
As I sit under a tree
Protected by it's shade
I realize my haven isn't free

Not knowing what to think
As I begin to tremble
Unable to blink
As I start to remember

Images of my past run through my mind
As it's myself I'm trying to find
So give me space and give me time
For it's the only thing I can't waste
I didn't leave in a haste
But still i found a bitter taste

I'm broken and colder than hell
Not able to tell
What happened long ago
I run to and fro
From my fear I have nowhere to go
Trying to hide but still wondering why
Fear and fate must sometime collide
Confronting my past will only make me crash
For once they know I become trash

Picture perfect is what i may seem
Wishing I were living a dream
Where everone was perfect
And everything a true fit

But dreams grow dark
Without the spark
That starts the fire
A lonely souls one desire

Copyright © Gothchyk ... [ 2005-01-11 18:12:29]
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Re: A lonely souls one desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:28:28 PM AEST
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"And everything a true fit." I hope we all find it, if it exists. Anyway, it's such a lonely write, like the one I just read before. These things grab at my sentimentality. *sighs* Blessings.

Re: A lonely souls one desire (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:37:43 PM AEST
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excellent write, well expressed

Re: A lonely souls one desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Addelyn on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:20:47 PM AEST
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Your poems have a way of pulling my emotions out of me. Good job on an excellent poem!

Re: A lonely souls one desire (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 4th November 2005 @ 01:04:19 PM AEST
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Your emotions are very well expressed in this write. If it makes you feel any better, no one is perfect! So no one should expect you to be...I enjoyed this read, and dealing with the past can be a challenge...But time will not make it disappear, but dealing with those skeletons will help take the sting out of those ol' haunts...Keep up the writes, this is good.

Scorp.

Re: A lonely souls one desire (User Rating: 1 )
by Crim on Tuesday, 21st February 2006 @ 07:40:45 PM AEST
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The way you express emotions with words is amazing. Very well done. I could pull out alot of examples off of your poem to show what ive enjoyed but that would also not do justice to the parts i dont pick, so overall its a great poem.

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