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Array ( [sid] => 79463 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Should Or Shouldnt [time] => 2005-01-11 17:21:16 [hometext] => to my ex boyfriend who i loved dearly and these are things i am really feeling. plz comment they are very welcome. [bodytext] => The Thought of you should make
me sick to my stomach.
the thought of you shouldn't
make my mind race or my heart pound.

Hereing your name should make me cringe
and glare. Hereing your name shouldn't make me
anxious about seeing you or look around wondering
were you are.

Saying your name should make me angry and
want to hit you. Saying your name shouldn't
make my heart drop and skip a beat.

Seeing eminem should make me hate him,
the way he looks and all his music. Seeing
eminem shouldn't make me love him more
or love his music everytime i listen to it.

Seeing a guy at school that looks exactly
like you should make me want to go and
smack him across the face and yell at him.
Seeing a guy at school that looks exactly like
you shouldn't make me wanna go hug and kiss
him or just go and talk to him.

When i say Hey to you on the net i should just
block you right then or chew you out for what
you did. When i say hey to you on the net i
shouldn't hope for you to talk to me and when
you dont get sad.

When i here your voice i should wanna scream
and yell and never wanna talk to you again.
When i here your voice i shouldn't wanna cry and
be happy and laugh and never wanna say good bye.

When i here that you cheated on me for 6 months
i should yell and cry and say i never want to talk to
you again. When i here that you cheated on me for 6
months i shouldn't say its ok and take you back and i
am hurt but I LOVE YOU so i dont want to lose you.

These are things i should care about you and things
i shouldn't care about you. I should just see you and
be filled with utter discust and never want to see
or talk to you again. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 55 [informant] => forgottenone_iam [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Should Or Shouldnt

Contributed by forgottenone_iam on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:21:16 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



The Thought of you should make
me sick to my stomach.
the thought of you shouldn't
make my mind race or my heart pound.

Hereing your name should make me cringe
and glare. Hereing your name shouldn't make me
anxious about seeing you or look around wondering
were you are.

Saying your name should make me angry and
want to hit you. Saying your name shouldn't
make my heart drop and skip a beat.

Seeing eminem should make me hate him,
the way he looks and all his music. Seeing
eminem shouldn't make me love him more
or love his music everytime i listen to it.

Seeing a guy at school that looks exactly
like you should make me want to go and
smack him across the face and yell at him.
Seeing a guy at school that looks exactly like
you shouldn't make me wanna go hug and kiss
him or just go and talk to him.

When i say Hey to you on the net i should just
block you right then or chew you out for what
you did. When i say hey to you on the net i
shouldn't hope for you to talk to me and when
you dont get sad.

When i here your voice i should wanna scream
and yell and never wanna talk to you again.
When i here your voice i shouldn't wanna cry and
be happy and laugh and never wanna say good bye.

When i here that you cheated on me for 6 months
i should yell and cry and say i never want to talk to
you again. When i here that you cheated on me for 6
months i shouldn't say its ok and take you back and i
am hurt but I LOVE YOU so i dont want to lose you.

These are things i should care about you and things
i shouldn't care about you. I should just see you and
be filled with utter discust and never want to see
or talk to you again.




Copyright © forgottenone_iam ... [ 2005-01-11 17:21:16]
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Re: Should Or Shouldnt (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:52:02 PM AEST
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Well no. If you're not feeling indifferent, you're still attached in some way. But your poem shows lots of emotion. Blessings.


Re: Should Or Shouldnt (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:00:57 PM AEST
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Trust me you will not get over this person if you dont allow yourself to find life once more..But hell..what do I know?


Re: Should Or Shouldnt (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 04:49:33 PM AEST
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meet other people that youll learn to love even more then this guy its not worth it to love someone who you know you may never see in the same way again. keep writing this was a good write ~chrissy




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