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Array ( [sid] => 79442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Six Months to Live [time] => 2005-01-11 15:41:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I woke early in the morning and went to work with disdain
I was seated before my computer, when suddenly to my surprise
There was a symptom in my flesh but without the pain
And so I knew I would have to go before a doctor’s eyes

“You have a cancer in your bone marrow
And there is nothing I can do
But before you go I just want you should know
That no matter what, God loves you”

God loved the world so much that His son had to die
And He loves me so much that I’m on His bad side
I really fear that all the Bible is just one great big lie
So perhaps I should seek a priest in whom I can confide

“I have always been in this profession
But I have never seen the Grim Reaper
I can do nothing for you if you have no confession
Because I am not my brother’s keeper”

This will be the longest six months of my life
But it will also be as worthless as all the filth in the polluted sky
So I decided to take a shortcut with a knife
And that’s when I found myself standing before God most High

“I shaped you in your mother’s womb and made you My work of art
You have lived a good life, you have done very well
And you will always have a special place in My heart
But there is still a very special place for you in hell” [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 13 [informant] => kratur [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Six Months to Live

Contributed by kratur on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:41:17 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



I woke early in the morning and went to work with disdain
I was seated before my computer, when suddenly to my surprise
There was a symptom in my flesh but without the pain
And so I knew I would have to go before a doctor’s eyes

“You have a cancer in your bone marrow
And there is nothing I can do
But before you go I just want you should know
That no matter what, God loves you”

God loved the world so much that His son had to die
And He loves me so much that I’m on His bad side
I really fear that all the Bible is just one great big lie
So perhaps I should seek a priest in whom I can confide

“I have always been in this profession
But I have never seen the Grim Reaper
I can do nothing for you if you have no confession
Because I am not my brother’s keeper”

This will be the longest six months of my life
But it will also be as worthless as all the filth in the polluted sky
So I decided to take a shortcut with a knife
And that’s when I found myself standing before God most High

“I shaped you in your mother’s womb and made you My work of art
You have lived a good life, you have done very well
And you will always have a special place in My heart
But there is still a very special place for you in hell”




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Re: Six Months to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:53:16 PM AEST
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I don't give a flying hoot what people say, Hell and purgatory are here on earth. And damn that Reaper cuz he keeps eluding me ... okay so that's what reading this brought to the surface for me. Thanks for sharing, enjoyed.

peace
TS


Re: Six Months to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:10:25 PM AEST
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You have very strange and confused ideas about God.
Stitch


Re: Six Months to Live (User Rating: 1 )
by Kellros on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 11:32:55 AM AEST
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a friend of mine has this saying : death is only the halfway point, living 6 months or eternity, time is measured only by our watches and clocks, but the soul lives forever, you could achieve more in 6 months that someone else could achieve in his whole lifetime! life is like nike's slogon: just do it...




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