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Breaking into a sweat holding onto that knife.
Knowing that doing this will end my entire life.

Only people hurt and nobody saved.
Sudden attention was all that i craved.

Blood rushing to my head not knowing what to do.
The fatal cut wouldn't only hurt me, it would hurt you to.

A tear drips down my face knowing i will die.
Telling everyone to skip my funeral, and please do not cry.

Please don't fret because i'm on to a different place.
One thing i want you to do is remember my happy face.

Dear family, i feel bad about doing this today.
I truly didn't want to make you feel this way.

Please forgive me i am sorry if i made you feel sad.
I'm not sure if i will ever see you in the promise land.

And those were the last things that i ever wrote.
Now i really regret ever writing that stupid note.

~Kay-Kay [comments] => 3 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Kay-Kay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Unhappy Ending

Contributed by Kay-Kay on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:34:51 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Unhappy Ending

Breaking into a sweat holding onto that knife.
Knowing that doing this will end my entire life.

Only people hurt and nobody saved.
Sudden attention was all that i craved.

Blood rushing to my head not knowing what to do.
The fatal cut wouldn't only hurt me, it would hurt you to.

A tear drips down my face knowing i will die.
Telling everyone to skip my funeral, and please do not cry.

Please don't fret because i'm on to a different place.
One thing i want you to do is remember my happy face.

Dear family, i feel bad about doing this today.
I truly didn't want to make you feel this way.

Please forgive me i am sorry if i made you feel sad.
I'm not sure if i will ever see you in the promise land.

And those were the last things that i ever wrote.
Now i really regret ever writing that stupid note.

~Kay-Kay

Copyright © Kay-Kay ... [ 2005-01-11 15:34:51]
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Re: Unhappy Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:12:46 PM AEST
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Very good ,I loved the ending

Re: Unhappy Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by Kratur on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:51:30 PM AEST
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the use of the lowercase "i" really kills your self-esteem and is excellent here... i think i read it at a weird instant in time because this one had a really big effect on me..
good write

~kratur

Re: Unhappy Ending (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 03:49:49 PM AEST
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when I tried to end all my sad troubles
it was in a tub of foaming bloody bubbles
I felt as if I were acting alone, on rote
so I never thought to leave a note..

interesting write..

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